8/31/2013 c4 Guest
Pretty Good
Pretty Good
7/28/2006 c4 twisterblake
hey great chapter i wonder what is going to happening next with uub and vegeta i hope uub can master his majin buu powers and become the strongest in the universe I hope
hey great chapter i wonder what is going to happening next with uub and vegeta i hope uub can master his majin buu powers and become the strongest in the universe I hope
7/5/2005 c4 7sportschickVLVR
COOL! That fight was so detailed... I like it! And I absolutely LOVE the phone convo. Haha, Chi-chi calling Vegeta's cell phone demanding for Goku... brilliant!
COOL! That fight was so detailed... I like it! And I absolutely LOVE the phone convo. Haha, Chi-chi calling Vegeta's cell phone demanding for Goku... brilliant!
7/5/2005 c3 sportschickVLVR
BRING IT ON! hahah. Vegeta vs. Uub... how... interesting lol. hahah I can totally picutre that whole scene, which him staring Uub down like that. Well onto the next chapter!
BRING IT ON! hahah. Vegeta vs. Uub... how... interesting lol. hahah I can totally picutre that whole scene, which him staring Uub down like that. Well onto the next chapter!
7/5/2005 c2 sportschickVLVR
Yea! Go Bulma! Always keeping a tight leash on that Veg-head of hers. Well, sorry it took me so long to review this. Lazy, lazy, lazy. Well anyway, this is great! LOL I can't wait to see Vegeta train him.
Yea! Go Bulma! Always keeping a tight leash on that Veg-head of hers. Well, sorry it took me so long to review this. Lazy, lazy, lazy. Well anyway, this is great! LOL I can't wait to see Vegeta train him.
6/10/2005 c4 14Scorpion29
Hee hee, I liked it, you need to work on the spelling a little but the rest is really fun. I love how you portray the males being wrapped around the women's fingers! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Hee hee, I liked it, you need to work on the spelling a little but the rest is really fun. I love how you portray the males being wrapped around the women's fingers! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/25/2005 c3 10KawaiiKittens
Like my moto goes "If you review my story, I'll review yours!" I always live up to it.
I just wanna say thanx for R&R my story, I think that it was Vegeta's poem. Anyways this is meant to be a review right? So let's get the show on tne road.
Firstly, I just wanna say that for the first Fanfic that you've writen this isn't bad at all. When you said in your review to me that your storys were crap, I thought that I would check it out myself! You shouldn't put yourself down ya know, it's not bad at all! Maybe you needed to make the begining a bit more clearer, you know tell people a bit more in the story were it's going an all! And there are quite a few spelling mistakes as well, just make sure that you go over the chapters before you submit them.
Mind you... I can talk, im the worst speller in the history of the world, so im not really one to comment on that! You said that you thought that you were about the same age as me, I hope that we could become mates!
Anyways, I didn't really mean to write this much, so I'd better stop! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Like my moto goes "If you review my story, I'll review yours!" I always live up to it.
I just wanna say thanx for R&R my story, I think that it was Vegeta's poem. Anyways this is meant to be a review right? So let's get the show on tne road.
Firstly, I just wanna say that for the first Fanfic that you've writen this isn't bad at all. When you said in your review to me that your storys were crap, I thought that I would check it out myself! You shouldn't put yourself down ya know, it's not bad at all! Maybe you needed to make the begining a bit more clearer, you know tell people a bit more in the story were it's going an all! And there are quite a few spelling mistakes as well, just make sure that you go over the chapters before you submit them.
Mind you... I can talk, im the worst speller in the history of the world, so im not really one to comment on that! You said that you thought that you were about the same age as me, I hope that we could become mates!
Anyways, I didn't really mean to write this much, so I'd better stop! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
5/25/2005 c3 Ozziewozacat
heh, remember me? its me. lolz. ne way, this is very good! keep going, k? ttfn
~emstar~ oh yeah, did you get my email?
heh, remember me? its me. lolz. ne way, this is very good! keep going, k? ttfn
~emstar~ oh yeah, did you get my email?
5/24/2005 c3 Dragon-Angel-of-Light
Well . . . I liked it.
I gotta say, though. It could be a whole bunch better. But, so could some of my stories.
Also, exactly what is the story line? Is it Vegeta and Uub becoming good friends? Hm . . .
Well, anyway, I think you should continue.
Well . . . I liked it.
I gotta say, though. It could be a whole bunch better. But, so could some of my stories.
Also, exactly what is the story line? Is it Vegeta and Uub becoming good friends? Hm . . .
Well, anyway, I think you should continue.
5/24/2005 c3 Mighty Agamemnon
Yea! That does describe Vegeta.
Yea! That does describe Vegeta.
5/24/2005 c1 Dragon-Angel-of-Light
I read your review for 'His Hidden Self'. You said you wanted me to check out your story, so I did.
So, let's see . . .
A few spelling errors (but I get those too).
Nice story line. Original as far as I could tell.
All in all, it was excellent! I'm gonna read the other chapters.
I read your review for 'His Hidden Self'. You said you wanted me to check out your story, so I did.
So, let's see . . .
A few spelling errors (but I get those too).
Nice story line. Original as far as I could tell.
All in all, it was excellent! I'm gonna read the other chapters.
5/24/2005 c3 47Clarobell
Cool chapter ... i bet bra ad vegeta are planning something evil ... Uub is so gonna get whipped!
Cool chapter ... i bet bra ad vegeta are planning something evil ... Uub is so gonna get whipped!
5/23/2005 c3 broly457
very good keep writing liked it allot
very good keep writing liked it allot
5/23/2005 c1 broly 457
i liked the fic a little more detial thow besidse that it was good atleast to me it was keep writing ha very good
i liked the fic a little more detial thow besidse that it was good atleast to me it was keep writing ha very good
5/15/2005 c2 Clarobell
Hey! Not bad! I LOVED the orange juice part! Poor Goten! I think you got the argument perfect aswell. Nobody dare talk when Bulma stands - so funny!
Hey! Not bad! I LOVED the orange juice part! Poor Goten! I think you got the argument perfect aswell. Nobody dare talk when Bulma stands - so funny!