for Return of the Lost6/24/2007 c11 
24Lefie
I am annoyed with the fact naruto is like a god it is no fun right now in all honestly i am more interested in sasuke though i am a strong naruto fan sasuke story is so more interesting
24LefieI am annoyed with the fact naruto is like a god it is no fun right now in all honestly i am more interested in sasuke though i am a strong naruto fan sasuke story is so more interesting
4/27/2007 c14 noname00
so far i enjoyed reading this series of yours and im glad that book 4 is the last one...i just hope you finish it some time this yr^^
so far i enjoyed reading this series of yours and im glad that book 4 is the last one...i just hope you finish it some time this yr^^
2/26/2007 c14 the panda
This story is too good to stop reading! Man, this chapter was great. But, is the village going to stop hating Naruto just because of his bloodline? I know I'm a little late to put in input as you are already onto book 4, but I at least want to be somewhat helpful to your story. Damn though, Lee got screwed...but it seems that Lee and Sebeki are going to get together(maybe?please)
This story is too good to stop reading! Man, this chapter was great. But, is the village going to stop hating Naruto just because of his bloodline? I know I'm a little late to put in input as you are already onto book 4, but I at least want to be somewhat helpful to your story. Damn though, Lee got screwed...but it seems that Lee and Sebeki are going to get together(maybe?please)
2/24/2007 c2 the panda
I don't know if you've been told, but "ramen" isn't spelled "raman." Also this is an awesome story and the fight scene was perfect. Naruto was the underdog and not some incredibly ridiculous "super Naruto."
I don't know if you've been told, but "ramen" isn't spelled "raman." Also this is an awesome story and the fight scene was perfect. Naruto was the underdog and not some incredibly ridiculous "super Naruto."
1/30/2007 c14 47Yaraslava Rada
Well, a series name would probably be best based on how the story ends. With a good ending you could call it 'The rise of light' or 'when darkness fades' or something. I like this story! Update soon please!
47Yaraslava RadaWell, a series name would probably be best based on how the story ends. With a good ending you could call it 'The rise of light' or 'when darkness fades' or something. I like this story! Update soon please!
1/5/2007 c14 Ty16
ok for 2 days i've been readin ur trilogy and its really good
i hope u update soon
a couple things tho for summoning technique u keep sayin juichiose when its supposed to be kuchiyose
and u keep changin wat honorific people use and sometimes u use the wrong one like once naruto called hinata hinata-chan then not even a sentence later he said hinata-kun
and naruto called sakura sakura-san once
and with the whole kyuubi and itachi deal a couple chapters ago he found otu tht it was kyuubi then last chapter he didnt kno at all
on a positive note i like tht explanation for the hiraishin and the fact tht u eliminated the need for the seal also the bloodlines those were nice
u should do a oneshot on the fight between hiashi and naruto except make it longer and make it infront of everyone so tht they see him wit the pheonixfire and all those summons poppin up everywhere tht was a nice scene good work keep it up
~Ty16
ok for 2 days i've been readin ur trilogy and its really good
i hope u update soon
a couple things tho for summoning technique u keep sayin juichiose when its supposed to be kuchiyose
and u keep changin wat honorific people use and sometimes u use the wrong one like once naruto called hinata hinata-chan then not even a sentence later he said hinata-kun
and naruto called sakura sakura-san once
and with the whole kyuubi and itachi deal a couple chapters ago he found otu tht it was kyuubi then last chapter he didnt kno at all
on a positive note i like tht explanation for the hiraishin and the fact tht u eliminated the need for the seal also the bloodlines those were nice
u should do a oneshot on the fight between hiashi and naruto except make it longer and make it infront of everyone so tht they see him wit the pheonixfire and all those summons poppin up everywhere tht was a nice scene good work keep it up
~Ty16
11/13/2006 c14 49MangaFreak15
Good chappie, where did you get the idea of a sun-soul? And why is Itachi telling Sasuke to kill him?
49MangaFreak15Good chappie, where did you get the idea of a sun-soul? And why is Itachi telling Sasuke to kill him?
11/12/2006 c7 MangaFreak15
Bwahahahaha...Itachi is sure scared shitless. But anyways, that was fucking bloody on the perverted part.
Bwahahahaha...Itachi is sure scared shitless. But anyways, that was fucking bloody on the perverted part.