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5/12/2005 c1 16AmberFox and Lyell
Finally! You updated! I thought you might be one of those guys that say you'll do something then put up a note saying they couldn't be bothered! Man! I hate that! Why am I not surprised Kyuubi wrote perverted books? But thairs more than 4 countries. He could write one for sound. But he would have to go there for 'research'. He he! Naruto would kick ass!
5/12/2005 c1 2ranma hibiki
now instead of 1 super pervert you have 2...tough luck for girls now BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

of course its boring right now kenchei. your in a hospital...although naruto and hinata being in the same room has PLENTY of potential for entertainment ^^
5/12/2005 c1 1Death By Kunai
AN UPDATE AN UPDATE AN UPDATE! HORRAY! I would hug you if you wern't on the other side of teh continent! More please! ^_^
5/12/2005 c1 Expired Doughnuts
Yay, an update. Good chapter, pretty short but good nonetheless, keep it up.
5/12/2005 c1 10Aliaandraa
O i was wondering when you'd update! =D Update soon!
5/12/2005 c1 sleepy kitty
^_^ been waiting a long time for this
5/12/2005 c1 9Dragon Man 180
A Haku vs Rekku one shot would be great. I love the idea of Hinata being Naruto's blanket, they're so cute together. Man, Kyuubi and Jiraiya should start a thrid series called Elemental Icha Paradise. I know Kakashi would buy it for sure.
5/11/2005 c1 RockFox
Nice to read more of your work! Hope you'll have time to continue updating. Looks like this is a great start to a great story!
5/11/2005 c1 crakbaby23
1st review! and i really like it so far, that bird is funny!
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