for Neon Genesis Humangelion5/17/2005 c1 
1Kazesaito
Interesting idea you have here. It has major potential and is fresh idea. Still, it needs work, mainly with the names. You should clarify who everyone is at the beginning of the next chapter just so everyone reading it has some context. Also, make this series unique, not just ripping of the original material. I look forward to seeing the Humangelion in action and describe it well please. Update soon and I'll review again. Good luck!
1KazesaitoInteresting idea you have here. It has major potential and is fresh idea. Still, it needs work, mainly with the names. You should clarify who everyone is at the beginning of the next chapter just so everyone reading it has some context. Also, make this series unique, not just ripping of the original material. I look forward to seeing the Humangelion in action and describe it well please. Update soon and I'll review again. Good luck!
5/17/2005 c1 matt020388
hey, you got some harsh reviews so far, eh? There's some good advice, but I'm sure more people will like your next chapter if it makes the characters more out of character, it is a parody. I think that if you keep going, people will see how crazy it will get. I mean, how's he gonna make all the eva attacks? there's only 4 evas if he doesn't use the MP's
hey, you got some harsh reviews so far, eh? There's some good advice, but I'm sure more people will like your next chapter if it makes the characters more out of character, it is a parody. I think that if you keep going, people will see how crazy it will get. I mean, how's he gonna make all the eva attacks? there's only 4 evas if he doesn't use the MP's
5/17/2005 c1 6NateGold
Meh. I understand that it's a parody, but whatever humor there is seems forced. So far, all this seems to be is a retelling of the first episode, subbing angel names in for the regulars.
Suggest you revise this, and try a diffent approach.
6NateGoldMeh. I understand that it's a parody, but whatever humor there is seems forced. So far, all this seems to be is a retelling of the first episode, subbing angel names in for the regulars.
Suggest you revise this, and try a diffent approach.
5/16/2005 c1 5ACGS
Well, it definetly was short. The idea really got me interested, but... I wasn't quite expecting Eva with different names. For me, all it seems is almost a plagerisim of the series, but with the Angel's names in place of the characters. I think, and this is purely opinion, that this concept would pan out to be a much better fic if it was quite a bit different from the series, but still keeping true to the Evas fighting the Angels. I hope this helped!
5ACGSWell, it definetly was short. The idea really got me interested, but... I wasn't quite expecting Eva with different names. For me, all it seems is almost a plagerisim of the series, but with the Angel's names in place of the characters. I think, and this is purely opinion, that this concept would pan out to be a much better fic if it was quite a bit different from the series, but still keeping true to the Evas fighting the Angels. I hope this helped!