for The Course of Events8/23/2005 c2 
1SoCalGirl3
That was a good way to work in "The Best Thing that Ever Happened to You" quote...I know with my own story I'm probably going to have to do something like that...the conflicting timeline of some events on The OC is throwing my story a little off. Good job!
1SoCalGirl3That was a good way to work in "The Best Thing that Ever Happened to You" quote...I know with my own story I'm probably going to have to do something like that...the conflicting timeline of some events on The OC is throwing my story a little off. Good job!
8/2/2005 c10 kandylover1
Hey!
That was very good. I like how they are from two completely different worlds but try to make it work. You rock. Please update soon.
Ally
Hey!
That was very good. I like how they are from two completely different worlds but try to make it work. You rock. Please update soon.
Ally
7/24/2005 c10 CynthiaB
I liked the chapter, it seemed a common issue between them.
Keep up the great work.
I liked the chapter, it seemed a common issue between them.
Keep up the great work.
7/22/2005 c10 Nels6354
I am truly loving this story! I read from 1-10 just now and I hope you continue writing more and more!
I am truly loving this story! I read from 1-10 just now and I hope you continue writing more and more!
7/22/2005 c10 Dogsbody
Sandy finds out, that Kirsten's worth Eight Million;great the conflict over if He could be a good enough Provider, without Caleb's"help" is just starting!
Sandy finds out, that Kirsten's worth Eight Million;great the conflict over if He could be a good enough Provider, without Caleb's"help" is just starting!
7/22/2005 c10 44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Oh come on, you have to be pleased with that, it was great. You got just the right balance of angsty argument with cute stuff. Wish I could do that.
NB. I love it when u update
44Ansy Pansy aka PanzOh come on, you have to be pleased with that, it was great. You got just the right balance of angsty argument with cute stuff. Wish I could do that.
NB. I love it when u update
7/22/2005 c10 kursk
Great chapter, I`m glad that her money finally made an appearance, I was starting to doubt about it.
Update ASAP.
Great chapter, I`m glad that her money finally made an appearance, I was starting to doubt about it.
Update ASAP.
7/22/2005 c10 7shelovesboots
Good update, I think you covered that issue really well!
Geez, I wish I had a trust fund like that! Haha
7shelovesbootsGood update, I think you covered that issue really well!
Geez, I wish I had a trust fund like that! Haha
6/22/2005 c9 kandylover1
Hey!
That was fantastic. I love how Kirsten was happy. haha. Sandy trying to drive stick. I would love to actually see that. You are an awesome writer.
love ya
Ally
Hey!
That was fantastic. I love how Kirsten was happy. haha. Sandy trying to drive stick. I would love to actually see that. You are an awesome writer.
love ya
Ally
6/22/2005 c9 Cynthia
Nice chapter.
The lesson was funny, and really sweet.
Can't wait till the next chapter.
Nice chapter.
The lesson was funny, and really sweet.
Can't wait till the next chapter.
6/18/2005 c8 Dogsbody
Julie's Maiden Name was Macbre? No wonder, She's such a Miserable Woman! Also Jimmy's Sister was named Marissa, and She too apparently had some kind of Emotional Problems; and was a serious Boozer too? Can We say foreshadowing?
Julie's Maiden Name was Macbre? No wonder, She's such a Miserable Woman! Also Jimmy's Sister was named Marissa, and She too apparently had some kind of Emotional Problems; and was a serious Boozer too? Can We say foreshadowing?
6/10/2005 c8 44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Oh oh oh!
That was so sad and really well written!
I liked how the suicide stayed a secret and how Sandy comforted Kirsten at the end
44Ansy Pansy aka PanzOh oh oh!
That was so sad and really well written!
I liked how the suicide stayed a secret and how Sandy comforted Kirsten at the end