
5/19/2005 c1
2The Shadow Bandit
What a great start to a story. I can't wait to see where you are going with it. Please update soon. Thanks for sharing.

What a great start to a story. I can't wait to see where you are going with it. Please update soon. Thanks for sharing.
5/19/2005 c1
3SheWolfe7
Hmm...a very interesting story so far. I like where you're going with this! I can't wait for another update.
-SheWolfe7

Hmm...a very interesting story so far. I like where you're going with this! I can't wait for another update.
-SheWolfe7
5/19/2005 c1 E.A.V
this is interesting...I hope that you will continue it...I would have been interested in reading more of the boy's life...the details of ones life often make the character more real and endearing to a reader...the letter's were succinct, but a little too sparse; I felt as though they should have included some comments that are personal to the relationship between Snape and Karal, as friends.
this is interesting...I hope that you will continue it...I would have been interested in reading more of the boy's life...the details of ones life often make the character more real and endearing to a reader...the letter's were succinct, but a little too sparse; I felt as though they should have included some comments that are personal to the relationship between Snape and Karal, as friends.
5/19/2005 c1
3shadylion
cool, am i ur first reviewer?
nice start to the story... i hope this wont turn out to be a severitus story, harry'll be cooler as an independent force...
guess he'll be going to hogwarts next, huh?

cool, am i ur first reviewer?
nice start to the story... i hope this wont turn out to be a severitus story, harry'll be cooler as an independent force...
guess he'll be going to hogwarts next, huh?
5/19/2005 c1 Clutchy
Too lazy to log in...
anyway, is this one shot or is there any continuation?
i hope it's still on. like it! ;)
Too lazy to log in...
anyway, is this one shot or is there any continuation?
i hope it's still on. like it! ;)
5/19/2005 c1 Taruza
Oh. I like it. I really do.
Karal's letter were really amusing :)
Keep up the great work!
Oh. I like it. I really do.
Karal's letter were really amusing :)
Keep up the great work!
5/19/2005 c1 fiery frost
I like your style, it makes me want to read more. Will be following this story :)
I like your style, it makes me want to read more. Will be following this story :)
5/19/2005 c1 Fiery Pheonix
I adore you!... I can't even begin to explain how much i love your new fic.
I love Harry/Julian's attitude.
and the Snakes!
Update soon!
I adore you!... I can't even begin to explain how much i love your new fic.
I love Harry/Julian's attitude.
and the Snakes!
Update soon!
5/19/2005 c1 ak-alterego
That's really awesome!
I really like it!
There are a few places it runs bumpy with spelling errors and grammar, but other than that it's pretty great!
I'd be happy to beta for you. I'm pretty good at returning chapters within a few days.
I'll be house sitting for a friend, and they might not have internet access, but there are places around my town with WiFi that I can use, so no worries, I'll always be contactable.
I beta for two other people, but only one sends in short (5pg) chapters every week. I also have a few stories of my own here on , you can check them out if you like.
-Alter
(just send me an email, perferrably with the chapter as an attachment, fw'd stuff ends up all wonky with my outlook program)
akalterego(at)fanfiction(dot)net
That's really awesome!
I really like it!
There are a few places it runs bumpy with spelling errors and grammar, but other than that it's pretty great!
I'd be happy to beta for you. I'm pretty good at returning chapters within a few days.
I'll be house sitting for a friend, and they might not have internet access, but there are places around my town with WiFi that I can use, so no worries, I'll always be contactable.
I beta for two other people, but only one sends in short (5pg) chapters every week. I also have a few stories of my own here on , you can check them out if you like.
-Alter
(just send me an email, perferrably with the chapter as an attachment, fw'd stuff ends up all wonky with my outlook program)
akalterego(at)fanfiction(dot)net
5/19/2005 c1 Shadow Of The Wolf
I really like it... Please update as soon as you can!
Ombra Della Lupus
I really like it... Please update as soon as you can!
Ombra Della Lupus