for Anarkia3/22/2016 c8 heliothrope
please don't let go it's too frustrating
we are longing for the end
regards
please don't let go it's too frustrating
we are longing for the end
regards
3/22/2016 c8 riverghost80
I had thought this story dead and buried so I was ecstatic to see a new chapter. I do hope you start writing again and look forward to more, however long it might take!
I had thought this story dead and buried so I was ecstatic to see a new chapter. I do hope you start writing again and look forward to more, however long it might take!
3/21/2016 c8 Raesicle
Awesome work honey! I really hope you get your writing MOJO back as its a brilliant story!
Thank you for the update and I look forward to when you can update again! :-) xx
Awesome work honey! I really hope you get your writing MOJO back as its a brilliant story!
Thank you for the update and I look forward to when you can update again! :-) xx
3/21/2016 c8 RStone8
Oh my, thank you thank you for this update. I love this story. I am praying that your muse starts back up. I hope that you will be able to finish this story. Thanks again for the update.
Oh my, thank you thank you for this update. I love this story. I am praying that your muse starts back up. I hope that you will be able to finish this story. Thanks again for the update.
3/21/2016 c8 Guest
Amazingly awesome fantastical story. Best read in a long time. I can't wait for the next installment. Any suggestions for a similar read?. Thanks
Amazingly awesome fantastical story. Best read in a long time. I can't wait for the next installment. Any suggestions for a similar read?. Thanks
3/20/2016 c8 Guest
This is good and I'm really happy you started it again. Hopefully you will finish this great story
This is good and I'm really happy you started it again. Hopefully you will finish this great story
3/20/2016 c8 shkw
Thanks!, your story is one of my favorite stories. Have really enjoyed the different premise and storyline. Was thrilled to see that another chapter was uploaded after so long. I do hope you have the time and motivation to complete it.
Thanks!, your story is one of my favorite stories. Have really enjoyed the different premise and storyline. Was thrilled to see that another chapter was uploaded after so long. I do hope you have the time and motivation to complete it.
3/20/2016 c8 Guest
Wonderful seeing a new chapter from you...
Hope that you will continue with the story...
Hopefully the next update will be sooner than a couple of years ;)
Wonderful seeing a new chapter from you...
Hope that you will continue with the story...
Hopefully the next update will be sooner than a couple of years ;)
3/19/2016 c8 Guest
This is a brilliant story! Please update!
This is a brilliant story! Please update!
3/19/2016 c8 Guest
thanks for the update. I hope you consider writing again you have such talent for it.
thanks for the update. I hope you consider writing again you have such talent for it.
3/19/2016 c6 hpnutt28
I have been going back and re-reading the entire story since the new chapter was added and I noticed a couple of inconsistencies so far. First after Evan does the ritual to block the lineage ritual, you mention Julian summoning his wand say that is the only wandless Magic he can do. However, in the previous chapter he does a lot more wandless and you say it is something sorcerers can easily do. Also, in this chapter where you show Julian meeting Edna Slytherin's portrait for the first time, you make Julian seem surprised the snake can talk, but in the very first chapter when he meets Severus he already has pet snakes and knows they can speak to him. Overall, this is an excellent story and well written. Just watch for the few inconsistencies throughout. You might consider finding a beta reader if you don't have one. They can be helpful in catching some of this. Can't wait to read more. I still have two more chapters to read to be caught up.
I have been going back and re-reading the entire story since the new chapter was added and I noticed a couple of inconsistencies so far. First after Evan does the ritual to block the lineage ritual, you mention Julian summoning his wand say that is the only wandless Magic he can do. However, in the previous chapter he does a lot more wandless and you say it is something sorcerers can easily do. Also, in this chapter where you show Julian meeting Edna Slytherin's portrait for the first time, you make Julian seem surprised the snake can talk, but in the very first chapter when he meets Severus he already has pet snakes and knows they can speak to him. Overall, this is an excellent story and well written. Just watch for the few inconsistencies throughout. You might consider finding a beta reader if you don't have one. They can be helpful in catching some of this. Can't wait to read more. I still have two more chapters to read to be caught up.
3/18/2016 c8 breathofmidnight
Ah an update! :D
Its fine if you don't get time to keep updating this story :( but it is one of my favorites. Fantastic chapter!
Ah an update! :D
Its fine if you don't get time to keep updating this story :( but it is one of my favorites. Fantastic chapter!
3/18/2016 c8 
1Lady Highschoolnerd
I won't lie- I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your update, since it's been 6 years (managed to start and finish college during those years!). I love your story and it has stuck with me those all these years (despite my voracious reading habits) I would love to see you continue. If not, best of luck with everything!
1Lady HighschoolnerdI won't lie- I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your update, since it's been 6 years (managed to start and finish college during those years!). I love your story and it has stuck with me those all these years (despite my voracious reading habits) I would love to see you continue. If not, best of luck with everything!