for Anarkia4/10/2017 c8 Lopendria
I am glad to have found your fic. It is well written, an original plot, and quite enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
I am glad to have found your fic. It is well written, an original plot, and quite enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
4/8/2017 c1 
4iamAdisco
Very well written. Can't believe you have taken 12 years to write this though...anyway. I quite liked the nuances of your version of magical society, and the character development that it brought to the plot. I do wish you'd be clearer about the OCs. Sometimes you use an OC like you expect us to know who they are, which is a bit grating. Other than that, 10/10
4iamAdiscoVery well written. Can't believe you have taken 12 years to write this though...anyway. I quite liked the nuances of your version of magical society, and the character development that it brought to the plot. I do wish you'd be clearer about the OCs. Sometimes you use an OC like you expect us to know who they are, which is a bit grating. Other than that, 10/10
4/1/2017 c8 Guest
After reading the first chapter and skiming the rest I have not found anything to do with Harry potter yet your story labels him as the main character this is not the case and annoys me greatly not saying what you have written is bad just the summary and labelling is pretty much false
After reading the first chapter and skiming the rest I have not found anything to do with Harry potter yet your story labels him as the main character this is not the case and annoys me greatly not saying what you have written is bad just the summary and labelling is pretty much false
4/1/2017 c8 belle hawk
I have just discovered this story and quite liked it. I'm adding it to my alert list incase you decide to update it. It's very well written and you don't have to write a huge story to complete it like some do due to inconsistency in their story. You are doing agood job so far and I hope you will write more soon
I have just discovered this story and quite liked it. I'm adding it to my alert list incase you decide to update it. It's very well written and you don't have to write a huge story to complete it like some do due to inconsistency in their story. You are doing agood job so far and I hope you will write more soon
3/24/2017 c8 Sam
I do wish there was more
I do wish there was more
3/18/2017 c8 cuddlyferret
This is one my favorite, I love everything. Your writing style is very neat and organized. It is an amazing story all in all and plays into every of my story goals!
This is one my favorite, I love everything. Your writing style is very neat and organized. It is an amazing story all in all and plays into every of my story goals!
3/2/2017 c4 2bigd95822
Well, I gotta tell you that this story has been outstanding so far! reminds me of Miranda Flairgold's changes in a time of war series. sadly she never completed it. I hope you won't abandon this, its really rich and delicious.
2bigd95822Well, I gotta tell you that this story has been outstanding so far! reminds me of Miranda Flairgold's changes in a time of war series. sadly she never completed it. I hope you won't abandon this, its really rich and delicious.
2/27/2017 c8 1Calmzone1
I hope life brings you the inspiration and incentive to continue this story. I know how hard it is sometimes to find the drive to continue writing when you're still having to deal with real life. This is a brilliant story and even if you never complete it, I'm still glad that I had the opportunity to read t. Yes, there are a few incorrect words and some minor, very minor editing required. This would be a brilliant original work without the Potterverse personalities. It would be easy to go through and change hair colour and major characteristics of people, even Voldemortmort and Dumbledore. Especially if you wrote of Julian's time at Nightshades, beginning with Severus discovery of a street urchin performing magic.
1Calmzone1I hope life brings you the inspiration and incentive to continue this story. I know how hard it is sometimes to find the drive to continue writing when you're still having to deal with real life. This is a brilliant story and even if you never complete it, I'm still glad that I had the opportunity to read t. Yes, there are a few incorrect words and some minor, very minor editing required. This would be a brilliant original work without the Potterverse personalities. It would be easy to go through and change hair colour and major characteristics of people, even Voldemortmort and Dumbledore. Especially if you wrote of Julian's time at Nightshades, beginning with Severus discovery of a street urchin performing magic.
2/26/2017 c8 UserJay
Please do continue. Love the realistically written Voldemort, Death Eaters & Julian. You made him powerful without the cringy overpowered abilities that are implemented in so many good fics to ultimately ruin them.
Again, love this story; please continue ;)
Please do continue. Love the realistically written Voldemort, Death Eaters & Julian. You made him powerful without the cringy overpowered abilities that are implemented in so many good fics to ultimately ruin them.
Again, love this story; please continue ;)