
5/5/2008 c1
23TheBeautyOfTheGrave
Aw! Thats so sad! I can see this happening (though I dont want to cos its too sad!) Please update if you can, it's really good...AND REALLY SAD!

Aw! Thats so sad! I can see this happening (though I dont want to cos its too sad!) Please update if you can, it's really good...AND REALLY SAD!
1/28/2008 c1 gdminority
Hey, it is a very good fiction^^i loved it
I have seen that you love Green Day too?:) great they are the best
sorry for the language, I don't speak english
Hey, it is a very good fiction^^i loved it
I have seen that you love Green Day too?:) great they are the best
sorry for the language, I don't speak english
5/3/2006 c1
11smithyfan
Ah i LOVE this fic you MUST MUST MUST continue it. You really portrayed the characters perfectly and I loved Andrews little vunerable spell showing that he does have a heart even if he's blocked his feelings out. I feel so bad for justin he's ace tho well done on an absolutely brilliant fic x

Ah i LOVE this fic you MUST MUST MUST continue it. You really portrayed the characters perfectly and I loved Andrews little vunerable spell showing that he does have a heart even if he's blocked his feelings out. I feel so bad for justin he's ace tho well done on an absolutely brilliant fic x
4/24/2006 c1
4DogsruleW
gah. you seriously need to continue this, it is soo good and the way it stops is driving me insane!

gah. you seriously need to continue this, it is soo good and the way it stops is driving me insane!
1/2/2006 c1 aaaaab
ohmygod! It's 1:45 in the morning and I'm bored out of my mind (because I seem not to sleep any more) and I start randomly wondering if there are Justin/Andrew fanfic. I didn't think there would be so thank you for proving me wrong. Much applause for a job very well done.
-Spike
ohmygod! It's 1:45 in the morning and I'm bored out of my mind (because I seem not to sleep any more) and I start randomly wondering if there are Justin/Andrew fanfic. I didn't think there would be so thank you for proving me wrong. Much applause for a job very well done.
-Spike
8/17/2005 c1 Daniel
Lovely story :)
Please write some more!
Lovely story :)
Please write some more!
7/31/2005 c1
19Secret Snoopy
This was very well-written. I don't think I found a single typing mistake. And the story was nice too. Great work. :)

This was very well-written. I don't think I found a single typing mistake. And the story was nice too. Great work. :)
7/3/2005 c1
3Yimon The Catman
Compliments on the story! In Desperate Housewives, Justin does come across as a slightly one dimensional character (though apparently not next season), and I't good to read something in which he has feelings.
Unless you just think he's hot?
Yeah. Me too^-^.

Compliments on the story! In Desperate Housewives, Justin does come across as a slightly one dimensional character (though apparently not next season), and I't good to read something in which he has feelings.
Unless you just think he's hot?
Yeah. Me too^-^.
6/9/2005 c1 Abby Lewis
Amazingly good... love the quotes.
Amazingly good... love the quotes.
6/6/2005 c1 kc
I love what you did with these characters. You made them come alive with thoughts and feelings. The tears and the kisses show how vulnerable and young Andrew is, while his denials show the walls he has alreay built around his heart. Like a tease, he lets Justin see his inner self. Then, he turns around and shuts him out. But Justin is already in love with the boy that Andrew could be. Justin is like a tragic hero who reaches for the elusive prize knowing the odds are stacked against him. You really set up their relationship very realistically. It's a brilliant piece of fanfic. Hopefully, you will write more about it!
I love what you did with these characters. You made them come alive with thoughts and feelings. The tears and the kisses show how vulnerable and young Andrew is, while his denials show the walls he has alreay built around his heart. Like a tease, he lets Justin see his inner self. Then, he turns around and shuts him out. But Justin is already in love with the boy that Andrew could be. Justin is like a tragic hero who reaches for the elusive prize knowing the odds are stacked against him. You really set up their relationship very realistically. It's a brilliant piece of fanfic. Hopefully, you will write more about it!