for There Inside5/23/2005 c1 fadeaway2u77
hey..this is great..i think u should expand upon it...but u should have a flashback of all that has happneed over erik and christines life for the last five years...and then bring rauol in the story somehow..i hate him..**make him die** evil laugh...i think its really good!
hey..this is great..i think u should expand upon it...but u should have a flashback of all that has happneed over erik and christines life for the last five years...and then bring rauol in the story somehow..i hate him..**make him die** evil laugh...i think its really good!
5/23/2005 c1 
5sarahbuggs
ooh! keep going! keep going! I think it has a lot of potential, but i think it moves a bit too fast to put all this in one chapter, you might consider having christine having a flashback to explain all the past, instead... and then Erik saying "oh, i'm sorry, i didn't know." Or something like that to explain that christine was telling him while she had the flashback. But you might want th e flashback to be spread over two or three chapters.
5sarahbuggsooh! keep going! keep going! I think it has a lot of potential, but i think it moves a bit too fast to put all this in one chapter, you might consider having christine having a flashback to explain all the past, instead... and then Erik saying "oh, i'm sorry, i didn't know." Or something like that to explain that christine was telling him while she had the flashback. But you might want th e flashback to be spread over two or three chapters.
5/23/2005 c1 erik'sangel527
ok, i really loved this! definately, you should expand! poor christine! but i liked how you used the "Angel, i hear you speak, i listen" line. very cool. stupid raoul. i hate him! but yes, expand, expand! you're a great writer!
ok, i really loved this! definately, you should expand! poor christine! but i liked how you used the "Angel, i hear you speak, i listen" line. very cool. stupid raoul. i hate him! but yes, expand, expand! you're a great writer!
5/23/2005 c1 horsegal
This is so sweet! It'll be good to know how Christine and Erik's relationship progress from here. =) But if it's gonna be a one-shot, it's a perfect ending.
This is so sweet! It'll be good to know how Christine and Erik's relationship progress from here. =) But if it's gonna be a one-shot, it's a perfect ending.