for Serendipity3/16/2020 c1 Guest
A plus. A fun little vignette.
A plus. A fun little vignette.
4/10/2018 c1 
1Where the hell am i
so um, you know he's a half-blood right? hence the name for the 6th book "Half-blood princePrince was his mothers maiden name)
1Where the hell am iso um, you know he's a half-blood right? hence the name for the 6th book "Half-blood princePrince was his mothers maiden name)
4/22/2015 c1 Guest
Awwwww I love you Severus Snape!
Awwwww I love you Severus Snape!
11/8/2014 c1 33KaiaLuna
Beautiful. My only criticism is that there isn't more you awful tease.
Thanks for sharing.
33KaiaLunaBeautiful. My only criticism is that there isn't more you awful tease.
Thanks for sharing.
10/3/2014 c1 Guest
:-)
:-)
9/7/2014 c1 Claudilla
lovely! So much in a one-shot. Kudos. I love angry then vulnerable then tender Severus. And lucky Ms. Granger:)
lovely! So much in a one-shot. Kudos. I love angry then vulnerable then tender Severus. And lucky Ms. Granger:)
8/3/2014 c1 Writtenaspr
Hm.. interesting, one is a bit OOC, with regards to caresses - , socially unsecure around woman
could be more Snapish than ' smile and they swoon- with delight'-..
I've just read the magnificent essay on Livejournal by drinkingcocoa called
"The Fully Knowable Severus Snape" from July 9th. 2009.
She is brilliant , intelligent and sensitive, and catches so many of his unexplained actions.
In rhe books Severus was portrayed as frankly ugly, yet a genius, utterly determined, intense, angrily tense about how people don't defend themselves, don't train and see the dangers clearly.
a man that isn't a Casanova when it comes to charm and smooth graces , is full of unresolved tension especially around women , ( he knows about his bodily unattractiveness, has had to swallow his hurt, and anger at Her , their lifelong rejection and mockery, and Hermione G. is a student of 2 minutes ago; the most he would have done is to smile and perhaps feel inwardly relieved the problem was solved... the wonderful A. Rickman was true to that portrayal: His proud, stiff coldness and scorn didn't radiate " Come , let's schmooze".
... sorry, I could not just give the usual blurp that graces a few stories here ..."AAhwsome."
You write too well, I had to answer seriously and respectfully.
I hope you are not too surprised and hurt. Sorry again.
Write more... you have a pen that is pleasing, humerous, and diligent, and I like your style.
Hm.. interesting, one is a bit OOC, with regards to caresses - , socially unsecure around woman
could be more Snapish than ' smile and they swoon- with delight'-..
I've just read the magnificent essay on Livejournal by drinkingcocoa called
"The Fully Knowable Severus Snape" from July 9th. 2009.
She is brilliant , intelligent and sensitive, and catches so many of his unexplained actions.
In rhe books Severus was portrayed as frankly ugly, yet a genius, utterly determined, intense, angrily tense about how people don't defend themselves, don't train and see the dangers clearly.
a man that isn't a Casanova when it comes to charm and smooth graces , is full of unresolved tension especially around women , ( he knows about his bodily unattractiveness, has had to swallow his hurt, and anger at Her , their lifelong rejection and mockery, and Hermione G. is a student of 2 minutes ago; the most he would have done is to smile and perhaps feel inwardly relieved the problem was solved... the wonderful A. Rickman was true to that portrayal: His proud, stiff coldness and scorn didn't radiate " Come , let's schmooze".
... sorry, I could not just give the usual blurp that graces a few stories here ..."AAhwsome."
You write too well, I had to answer seriously and respectfully.
I hope you are not too surprised and hurt. Sorry again.
Write more... you have a pen that is pleasing, humerous, and diligent, and I like your style.
7/30/2014 c1 jensteed
Great story. I loved the end, wanting to see the look on Dumbledore's face, haha I wish I could have seen it :D
Great story. I loved the end, wanting to see the look on Dumbledore's face, haha I wish I could have seen it :D