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3/30/2007 c1 14April Dawn Irene
Did you roleplay this in chat or something?
3/3/2006 c3 AgentKalGibbs
lol... ur wierd...!

loved it.
8/18/2005 c3 9eternalhope08
um...quite frankly, I don't understand how you got all those reviews saying this story was so great. It wasn't. Everything happened so fast, and the whole idea of Clark just accepting the red kryptonite that Pete gave him? Unlikely. He's got morals, and would quite literally never just go along with this whole thing. Lana, Pete, Clark, everyone is out of character. Also, I wish you had wrote it in story format instead of constant dialogue...that kind of takes away from the story.

So yeah, I guess this is kinda a flame, and I'm sorry if you're offended, but I wanted to give you some constructive criticism. Maybe what I said would help-I hope so. Either way, good luck in whatever stories you attempt next.
8/18/2005 c3 1tommygirl93
this is a great story! it has a perfect begging and i think u should write more chapters but other than that i think this is a great story and look forward to maybe reading future chapters! please write more!
7/30/2005 c3 5christopher i finks
lol. I enjoyed this actually. Great job. ^_^.

~Christopher~
7/24/2005 c3 2clana4ever
aww, that was good. well i'm glad everything is happy. but a little advice, try making words like I will and You are into I'll and Yu're. it makes the story flow better. but i love your story and i hope you continue! :D
7/23/2005 c3 25TheFabDonna
I loved the, MOM I can't cook part. That cracked me up! And this story is going great! Love to see an update!
7/20/2005 c3 1dotylink64
great chap/ keep going
7/18/2005 c3 2SupernaturalGal6
keep going...
7/18/2005 c3 5mir21
this is so great! i love Lana! Yehaw
7/17/2005 c3 12suekosa
hahahaha Clark's gotta learn to cook did he fail FACS?

Great story
7/17/2005 c1 1awesome april
yea!good story keep going
7/17/2005 c3 2clarkkentsbabygirl
Im likeing this story. Even though im not really into CLanas i will make an exception for this one. keep up the good work!
7/17/2005 c3 7FeelFlows
Lana should get the bed...anyway great fic update soon! I hope they have a boy!
6/20/2005 c2 2SupernaturalGal6
ah, poor Lana. Please keep going...
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