for The Walk3/20/2013 c4 Guest
pheww... for a second i thought he was cheating on her!
pheww... for a second i thought he was cheating on her!
12/31/2010 c2 tiaragirl1211
not good. at all. it's
GREAT. really great
not good. at all. it's
GREAT. really great
1/12/2009 c8 
1xXXx FromFiction xXXx
This chapter was very good! Best I've read out of all eight I'd have to say. Yes, it was a bit long, but I enjoyed every second reading it because the chapter was so well written that I got carried away in it almost like I was right there! I love it! I love all of your work, it's simiply amazing!
1xXXx FromFiction xXXxThis chapter was very good! Best I've read out of all eight I'd have to say. Yes, it was a bit long, but I enjoyed every second reading it because the chapter was so well written that I got carried away in it almost like I was right there! I love it! I love all of your work, it's simiply amazing!
1/12/2009 c7 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
Omg! Eric missed the babies being born! That's horrbile, but I love it anyway! Lol. At the end when Eric saw Bee and Naughty kiss, my heart started pounding! It was a very great chapter, I loved everything about it!
Omg! Eric missed the babies being born! That's horrbile, but I love it anyway! Lol. At the end when Eric saw Bee and Naughty kiss, my heart started pounding! It was a very great chapter, I loved everything about it!
1/12/2009 c6 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
One again, I'm not ecaxtly sure how to give this chapter criticism... It was well thought out it seems with good detail. Once again, I loved all of the communication. Great work!
One again, I'm not ecaxtly sure how to give this chapter criticism... It was well thought out it seems with good detail. Once again, I loved all of the communication. Great work!
1/12/2009 c5 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
Amazing! You have me now wondering if Bees' stress is going to cause prematurity for the babies and how the birthing is going to go because of Erics' dream. This story is taking my mind in many directions of possibilities of what is going to happen next. I'll have to say, this is my faviourite story I've ever read!
Amazing! You have me now wondering if Bees' stress is going to cause prematurity for the babies and how the birthing is going to go because of Erics' dream. This story is taking my mind in many directions of possibilities of what is going to happen next. I'll have to say, this is my faviourite story I've ever read!
1/12/2009 c4 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
Loved it alot! I'm actually getting carried away while reading this and ignoring my parents telling me to get off, lol. This (And the others I've read) chapter is amazing! I love how it seems that Bee and Eric can tell each other anything and understand eachother greatly. Great work!
Loved it alot! I'm actually getting carried away while reading this and ignoring my parents telling me to get off, lol. This (And the others I've read) chapter is amazing! I love how it seems that Bee and Eric can tell each other anything and understand eachother greatly. Great work!
1/12/2009 c3 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
I don't even know how to give this any criticism..Hnoestly, I love your writing to death already! I love how the paragraphs arn't very long and there's alot of communication between characters. The discripition seems to be faded though now, but it's not worrying me. You're a talented writer and I can't wait to read more!
I don't even know how to give this any criticism..Hnoestly, I love your writing to death already! I love how the paragraphs arn't very long and there's alot of communication between characters. The discripition seems to be faded though now, but it's not worrying me. You're a talented writer and I can't wait to read more!
1/12/2009 c2 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
Oh my! This was such a great chapter ! I wish it was longer but since there is 9 chapters in total, I have nothing to worry about :) Lol. Hm. Actually thinking about it, there's nothing I didn't like about it! It was all wonderful and I liked how you added the other characters into it. Very excellent!
Oh my! This was such a great chapter ! I wish it was longer but since there is 9 chapters in total, I have nothing to worry about :) Lol. Hm. Actually thinking about it, there's nothing I didn't like about it! It was all wonderful and I liked how you added the other characters into it. Very excellent!
1/12/2009 c1 xXXx FromFiction xXXx
I felt that this story was very discriptive and seemed as if it was well thought out. It's the type of story that I would look forward to finding out more about Alicia and Eric Jr when they grow older: This would make a GREAT bundle of chapters that I would really enjoy reading. All in all, this was a really great chapter!
I felt that this story was very discriptive and seemed as if it was well thought out. It's the type of story that I would look forward to finding out more about Alicia and Eric Jr when they grow older: This would make a GREAT bundle of chapters that I would really enjoy reading. All in all, this was a really great chapter!
2/16/2008 c6 3soundedlikefootsteps
hey great story so far! but, in this chapter, you said that she was making waffles for him, and then a second later, she gave him pancakes... i don't get it... can you R & R my stories please?
hooked-on-harry
3soundedlikefootstepshey great story so far! but, in this chapter, you said that she was making waffles for him, and then a second later, she gave him pancakes... i don't get it... can you R & R my stories please?
hooked-on-harry
1/4/2008 c9 8NaleyBrucasFan - aka Lizzy
PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY! IT'S SUCH A GREAT PLOT AND YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL! I really really really really wish that you would right more!
8NaleyBrucasFan - aka LizzyPLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY! IT'S SUCH A GREAT PLOT AND YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL! I really really really really wish that you would right more!