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11/30/2013 c3 Catlady1960
Wow. There's a bit of Ron and Harry bashing, hunh?
1/17/2013 c1 6Pretty Desdemona
This is exquisitely written! To the point that I'm actually surprised lol. I'm not usually a fan of slash but I might just have to give this one a go! Nice work.
4/5/2012 c3 6AngelicType
Hi, your writing style is fantastic. There's one thing however that I don't really like. When there are too many scenes in a chapter, it makes me confused. Maybe you could give the single line divident or ***** between paragraphs:) Otherwise, this is the best Harry Potter fanfic. that I have read so far:D
2/7/2012 c1 2Narutoking15
I love how you introduce each of the characters are acting the exact way they personalities are portrayed d by j.k Rowling i going to finish reading each of the chapters and it looks awesome so far i don't know why you didn't get many reviews
12/21/2011 c1 Saiyan Mother
I am really sorry for using this method to contact you, but I couldn't find the message button to pm you. I was really wondering if I could have you beta this Blade Trinity story I am writing. I really like what you put on your beta profile, and I think you would do an amazing job with my story. If you are possibly interested, my email is . Thank you so much for your consideration. ^_^
4/16/2010 c3 B.J. Gauthier
I like how you wrote Snape, it was fun to read, please update soon.
3/7/2010 c3 59superlc529
Sorry to impose on your story, but I wanted to reply to your PM and you disabled that capability for your account. I didn't really mean 'dark-haired' when I sent that reply. I clicked 'Send' before I could go back and edit it. I did mean with brown hair, and yes I know that Kristin has black hair. But, if you watch some of the episodes, in certain lighting, her hair can look lighter... and in a lapse of I don't know insanity or something, I typed "auburn". It's not that big of a deal, and you're making it out like it's a travesty of justice or something. I can always accept constructive criticism, but usually when people do that, and the courteous thing to do, is mix it in with things they like about something and they'll say, "but" and then say it. You're just ripping through the story with a fine-tooth comb and all authors, no matter how outstanding they are, and professionals that have published books, will always have some sort of inconsistency. Things can slip past them: spelling errors, one little inconsitency in the story, grammatical errors, forgeting to space, anything like that. And when you review, it'd be nice if you capitalized what needs to be capitilized such as the beginning of your sentences, the characters' names, and "I". If you had all these problems with my story then you shouldn't have replied. Again, my apologies for leaving a review for this story when all I wanted to say was a response to your message... to those of you reading this story, carry on, I apologize to you too for intruding.

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