for Krad's Experience at McDonald's6/26/2010 c1 dez
Lol. That was so funny. Please go on and continue. (I burst out laughing and snickering. Muttering dead french fries)
Lol. That was so funny. Please go on and continue. (I burst out laughing and snickering. Muttering dead french fries)
8/21/2006 c1 XxFallenSpiritxX
that was halarious would you please continue. i mean french dead ? hahahahahahah
that was halarious would you please continue. i mean french dead ? hahahahahahah
7/4/2006 c1 Modified Tam
Erghm, if you're planning on continueing (not that it would be bad), but use commas, and other thinys, kay?
It's very distracting to read, when you don't know who's saying what, and who's asking what.
Erghm, if you're planning on continueing (not that it would be bad), but use commas, and other thinys, kay?
It's very distracting to read, when you don't know who's saying what, and who's asking what.
9/5/2005 c1 
5gaara-no-suna
"These french fries are dead."
Me: /laughing/ Ah, that's so funny. ^^ Soo, soo funny.
Calismo: /rolls eyes/ I guess.
Me: Don't listen to her. Funny!
5gaara-no-suna"These french fries are dead."
Me: /laughing/ Ah, that's so funny. ^^ Soo, soo funny.
Calismo: /rolls eyes/ I guess.
Me: Don't listen to her. Funny!
8/18/2005 c1 11Kumori-hime
I normally read longer stuff, but this was good. A break from heavey reading. (I should do one-shots more often.) I like it.
11Kumori-himeI normally read longer stuff, but this was good. A break from heavey reading. (I should do one-shots more often.) I like it.
7/19/2005 c1 4Hiei-Is-Mine
this was funny! ^_^ cute too oh yes you should continue...^_^ my friend thinks they should go to Wendy' next -_-U but Dark does have a big stomach so w/e ^_^ update soon if u do!
4Hiei-Is-Minethis was funny! ^_^ cute too oh yes you should continue...^_^ my friend thinks they should go to Wendy' next -_-U but Dark does have a big stomach so w/e ^_^ update soon if u do!
6/11/2005 c1 RazorBladexIceCream
Wow. That was funny! Lol...more lol... lol... I can't stop loling... lol.
Wow. That was funny! Lol...more lol... lol... I can't stop loling... lol.
6/11/2005 c1 11gure'slilinu
krad: i will kill you for putting this on here! if you put my name on this i will personaly rip your heart out!
dark: aw i thought it was funny!
krad: i don't...
dark: kyon-kichi-kun, you don't except annonomous reviews so Kradikins couldn't review you...
hugs kisses and ale all 'round
gure's lil inu
11gure'slilinukrad: i will kill you for putting this on here! if you put my name on this i will personaly rip your heart out!
dark: aw i thought it was funny!
krad: i don't...
dark: kyon-kichi-kun, you don't except annonomous reviews so Kradikins couldn't review you...
hugs kisses and ale all 'round
gure's lil inu
6/11/2005 c1 24shimo hyozan
it's cute! you really should continue this! i have a suggesion though, if you don't mind. maybe you could add quotation marks? it would really be helpful tou readers. anyway, great start! :D
24shimo hyozanit's cute! you really should continue this! i have a suggesion though, if you don't mind. maybe you could add quotation marks? it would really be helpful tou readers. anyway, great start! :D
6/9/2005 c1 4checkprofile4newaccount
go on! (laughs and squirms in seat) ur story is very funny! Dead french fries! Omg, i'm choking on my ice cream!
4checkprofile4newaccountgo on! (laughs and squirms in seat) ur story is very funny! Dead french fries! Omg, i'm choking on my ice cream!