for A World That Doesn't Care12/25/2009 c7 Crystalline92
Hope you update soon, seeing as I really like this ^^ It has an interesting storyline so far.
Hope you update soon, seeing as I really like this ^^ It has an interesting storyline so far.
3/21/2009 c7 
9Aretsu Hiwatari
You should really finish! I've read a whole lot of Cinderella stories but yours is the best by far! I hate the fact that Ray is getting abused but what's Cinderella with out a little violence here and there. Hey let's say Kai gets there early and sees Ray and Ray avoids him though out the day, remembering Boris' orders. Kai gets pissed off and follows Ray home. He then sees as soon as Ray opens the door to go in he gets hit and yelled at. Kai gets mad and barges in, starts yelling at Boris and takes Ray away. Ray is trying to get away and Kai tells him that even though Ray might not feel anything for him he wants him to know that he likes him. Ray shocked on two accounts. Kai thought that he didn't like him and that Kai said that he liked him. And you can take it from there. Sorry but I always give writers some advice, even though I don't know when to shut up. Keep up the excellent work! Later!
Oh and can you please tell people about my story, Kindan No Ai? Read it yourself and see if you could help me. I'm at a lost. Damn writers' block!
9Aretsu HiwatariYou should really finish! I've read a whole lot of Cinderella stories but yours is the best by far! I hate the fact that Ray is getting abused but what's Cinderella with out a little violence here and there. Hey let's say Kai gets there early and sees Ray and Ray avoids him though out the day, remembering Boris' orders. Kai gets pissed off and follows Ray home. He then sees as soon as Ray opens the door to go in he gets hit and yelled at. Kai gets mad and barges in, starts yelling at Boris and takes Ray away. Ray is trying to get away and Kai tells him that even though Ray might not feel anything for him he wants him to know that he likes him. Ray shocked on two accounts. Kai thought that he didn't like him and that Kai said that he liked him. And you can take it from there. Sorry but I always give writers some advice, even though I don't know when to shut up. Keep up the excellent work! Later!
Oh and can you please tell people about my story, Kindan No Ai? Read it yourself and see if you could help me. I'm at a lost. Damn writers' block!
7/11/2008 c7 kitty-of-purple
HAHA "son of a brat!" that's good ^^ and so is the story I hope you
write more i really really hope you do. I'm glad that Tala got a black-eye it's what he deserves for trying to steal Rei's man D: (though a TalaXKai rape thing might of been interesting _ _)
your story is awesome!
HAHA "son of a brat!" that's good ^^ and so is the story I hope you
write more i really really hope you do. I'm glad that Tala got a black-eye it's what he deserves for trying to steal Rei's man D: (though a TalaXKai rape thing might of been interesting _ _)
your story is awesome!
7/11/2008 c6 kitty-of-purple
*sigh of relief* I though that his step father was going to smack him or something. It's a great story as always^^
*sigh of relief* I though that his step father was going to smack him or something. It's a great story as always^^
7/11/2008 c5 kitty-of-purple
It's good! Really really good! :D I hope Rei gets better though. TT^TT Hang on Rei, Kai there to save you!
It's good! Really really good! :D I hope Rei gets better though. TT^TT Hang on Rei, Kai there to save you!
7/11/2008 c4 kitty-of-purple
Those are good code names! X3 I wonder what Kai saw (Mischievous thoughts *sparkling eyes*)
Those are good code names! X3 I wonder what Kai saw (Mischievous thoughts *sparkling eyes*)
7/11/2008 c3 kitty-of-purple
Wow i didn't think that, the whole nurse's office thing would be like that, but it worked out good cause Kai got to save the day! XD
Wow i didn't think that, the whole nurse's office thing would be like that, but it worked out good cause Kai got to save the day! XD