for Power of the Ocean6/22/2006 c1 TreasureHunt
*le gasp* Wow what a breathtaking story and specifically chapter. You have most dazziling writing abilities I hope to see much more.
Best Of Luck with everything and everything imaginable,
TreasureHunt
*le gasp* Wow what a breathtaking story and specifically chapter. You have most dazziling writing abilities I hope to see much more.
Best Of Luck with everything and everything imaginable,
TreasureHunt
6/22/2006 c2 
1Saroo
Yea, I'm reviewing this chapter 'cause you can't leave multiple reviews for the same chapter: I just wanted to say that I was spell-bound throughout the ENTIRE thing and no offence to Melissa but I found no "mild tediousness" whatsoever, and was not once bored throughout the whole of the book, and I'd like to see ya do better, Miss Prissy, cause this is the best book on this site, and I do not appreciate the degrading of it! Also, I'd like to say that I've heard nicer and more constructive reviews for shorter, and much less intriguing and masterful stories than this.
-One angry and indignant Saroo
1SarooYea, I'm reviewing this chapter 'cause you can't leave multiple reviews for the same chapter: I just wanted to say that I was spell-bound throughout the ENTIRE thing and no offence to Melissa but I found no "mild tediousness" whatsoever, and was not once bored throughout the whole of the book, and I'd like to see ya do better, Miss Prissy, cause this is the best book on this site, and I do not appreciate the degrading of it! Also, I'd like to say that I've heard nicer and more constructive reviews for shorter, and much less intriguing and masterful stories than this.
-One angry and indignant Saroo
6/21/2006 c24 katweena
OH MY GOD HE RAPED HER?
I'LL KILL GRIFFITH! I WILL!
Poor Astrid! *Gives her a hot bath and chocolate.*
OH MY GOD HE RAPED HER?
I'LL KILL GRIFFITH! I WILL!
Poor Astrid! *Gives her a hot bath and chocolate.*
6/19/2006 c24 Melissa
I love your story. Despite it's mild tediousness and some boring scenes I think you have done a wonderful job with what you have. Do I think it could be better? Of course! But no story is perfect and it is truely hard, I believe, to write such a prolonged and dramatic story with out much leave from it. I would like to congradulate you on a job well done I can't wait to read more.
I love your story. Despite it's mild tediousness and some boring scenes I think you have done a wonderful job with what you have. Do I think it could be better? Of course! But no story is perfect and it is truely hard, I believe, to write such a prolonged and dramatic story with out much leave from it. I would like to congradulate you on a job well done I can't wait to read more.
6/13/2006 c24 3AlseyGwinn
What...the...fuck...? That was angasty and sad and wonderfull and if you dont update soon I'm gonna hunt you down, tie you to a chair, and make you update! Wonderfull chapter by the way.
~Izzy
3AlseyGwinnWhat...the...fuck...? That was angasty and sad and wonderfull and if you dont update soon I'm gonna hunt you down, tie you to a chair, and make you update! Wonderfull chapter by the way.
~Izzy
6/5/2006 c24 12Dawnie7
Wow. Most defnitely the darkest chapter you've ever written. I can't even begin to comprehend the happenings of this chapter. You would think the poor thing would catch a break here and there, but nothng. Just horrible. Amazing job though, you should never doubt yourself.
12Dawnie7Wow. Most defnitely the darkest chapter you've ever written. I can't even begin to comprehend the happenings of this chapter. You would think the poor thing would catch a break here and there, but nothng. Just horrible. Amazing job though, you should never doubt yourself.
6/4/2006 c24 humblelilbookworm
aww wut a sad chapter...wut happens to astrid ? is she kicked off the ship? roland should ttly kick griffiths srry lil behind!
aww wut a sad chapter...wut happens to astrid ? is she kicked off the ship? roland should ttly kick griffiths srry lil behind!
6/3/2006 c24 1Saroo
OMYFREAKINGGAH!
... poor Astrid...
KILL GRIFFITH!
I NEVER expected that one. Omg! I wanna kill Griffith that filthy... AH!
1SarooOMYFREAKINGGAH!
... poor Astrid...
KILL GRIFFITH!
I NEVER expected that one. Omg! I wanna kill Griffith that filthy... AH!
6/3/2006 c24 4Paprika30
I found your story "Astrid" the other day and have been reading up to this point ever since then. Far too engrossed in the story to leave a review as I do under normal circumstances, I'd just like to say "sorry" for that because the reviews are one of the best things about posting fanfiction. That being said, I'll move on to the next order of business before I actually review- me. I BETA-read and write fanfiction, and understand the importance of a comprehensive review. Therefore, if I leave a highly critical review, know that it is nothing against you or your story, just me being my usual nit-picky self. So- the story! I actually don't have anything to critique in this chapter, it was amazing. One thing that astounds me is how well-researched this story is. Also, the story is very well-plotted, you've never had to resort to the author's note in the middle of a story where you say (oh, and this happened_). The poetry also fits the story perfectly, and I assume that you wrote it. I especially love the first poem in this chapter, it was simple but yet so complex. I think that I've babbled on long enough, so I'll leave the review at this: this story is amazing and grammatically sound.
~Stacey
4Paprika30I found your story "Astrid" the other day and have been reading up to this point ever since then. Far too engrossed in the story to leave a review as I do under normal circumstances, I'd just like to say "sorry" for that because the reviews are one of the best things about posting fanfiction. That being said, I'll move on to the next order of business before I actually review- me. I BETA-read and write fanfiction, and understand the importance of a comprehensive review. Therefore, if I leave a highly critical review, know that it is nothing against you or your story, just me being my usual nit-picky self. So- the story! I actually don't have anything to critique in this chapter, it was amazing. One thing that astounds me is how well-researched this story is. Also, the story is very well-plotted, you've never had to resort to the author's note in the middle of a story where you say (oh, and this happened_). The poetry also fits the story perfectly, and I assume that you wrote it. I especially love the first poem in this chapter, it was simple but yet so complex. I think that I've babbled on long enough, so I'll leave the review at this: this story is amazing and grammatically sound.
~Stacey
6/3/2006 c24 she
poor astrid
poor astrid
5/28/2006 c18 3AlseyGwinn
But...wouldn't Astrid be the 'Hidden Jewel'? After all, Jack said that 'not all treasure is silver and gold mate' when he was talking about Elizabeth right? So wouldn't she herself be the treasure thus leading her on a wild goose chase and some how meeting up with Adam and jack along the way-...OH I GET IT! Keep up the good work, i'm off to read the rest!
3AlseyGwinnBut...wouldn't Astrid be the 'Hidden Jewel'? After all, Jack said that 'not all treasure is silver and gold mate' when he was talking about Elizabeth right? So wouldn't she herself be the treasure thus leading her on a wild goose chase and some how meeting up with Adam and jack along the way-...OH I GET IT! Keep up the good work, i'm off to read the rest!