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6/30/2006 c1 Forgottenhobbit
That is so sweet and strong. I love how you described feelings
7/4/2005 c1 9Kawaii Plushie Fetish
-smacks.- Aww... That was too cute! Honestly, more people need to write Jade Empire Fics! Nice poem, anyways. I couldn't see someone with a name like 'Furious Ming' being a 'hopeless romantic' but still... Very cute...

I've thought about pairing Dawn Star with the Gate
6/26/2005 c1 13EvilEatingSanta
Whe! Poetry! I love reading poetry because it takes like... .334 seconds but it's really interesting. Great job, here, though...even if it is a little sappy. I can't write poetry to save my life, so I admire anyone who can...*points at Ishboo* YOU SUCK! Wahahaa...okay, sorry. Back to the review. Sappiness isn't bad...trees aren't bad...I'm going to wrap this up. Good jerb! Au revoir!
6/16/2005 c1 3gekkeiju
it WAS sappy, but yet somehow just right.

at beautiful.

good job.
6/16/2005 c1 1Envincebal
Oh, this peom was plenty sappy if that is what you are looking to achieve. I love the part where you compare Dawn Star to the sun. Dawn Star is one of my favorite characters so I welcome any fics about her! Excellent work!
6/16/2005 c1 6AlmightyIshboo
Whe! Hooray for sappy poetry! Good job, I can't write poetry worth beans, which was kind of bad considering my final grade in English class WAS a poetry unit...

Anyhoo, I look forward to seeing more from you soon! Ja ne!

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