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for fleeting innocence

6/21/2005 c1 pony's girl
i really enjoyed this story. it shows that all the characters have substance and real emotions. it also shows that they are all affected by their friends and family and they are all so tightly knit together. the moral of the story is believe in yourself. you're not worthless, nobody's perfect like we all wish we were.
6/15/2005 c1 milola
Awesome!
6/14/2005 c1 32Hahukum Konn
Ok, the whacking people with a cane in a rumble thing cracked me up :D

On a more serious note, I'm glad you wrote this one-shot (if it is to remain as one), because it's a reminder of how much we hide our interior selves from others, even our closest friends. It's also a reminder of how easy it is to get stuck in something you shouldn't get stuck in.

So thanks. :-)
6/14/2005 c1 2innocentdevil07
Wow. That really hit me,it was so amazing! I really cant believe that you just could write something like that i guess you are just like S.E Hinton herself. And for your friends they are maybe going through something when you notice they are slipping away you need to tell them. Tell them that you are there. Great story! It was so... well it made me think. You did great!

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