for Conferences, Concerns, Conflicts6/27/2006 c11 
16CrazyHouse
As I Said before great story and I really love it, but you said that Sara took her cell phone and called Greg but at the end you said Nick put his phone back on his belt.
16CrazyHouseAs I Said before great story and I really love it, but you said that Sara took her cell phone and called Greg but at the end you said Nick put his phone back on his belt.
6/27/2006 c3 CrazyHouse
Love the story. I was just wondering when was the second chance that Sara gave to Grissiom foe them to be togther. I know the epissod of the exploson but waht other time did she give him a chance. Thanks and I really love it.
Love the story. I was just wondering when was the second chance that Sara gave to Grissiom foe them to be togther. I know the epissod of the exploson but waht other time did she give him a chance. Thanks and I really love it.
8/9/2005 c16 Blondie
That was so sweet!
That was so sweet!
7/20/2005 c4 amanda
I like your premise, but just a couple things you might want to clean up:
Punctuation-proper use of periods, commas, semi-colons, etc.
Also, you do not need to put quotation marks around every sentance in the dialogue-one at the beginning of what the character says and one at the end:
You wrote-“Oh, okay” “Nick I’ll talk to you later” “I have to call Grissom and tell him that I am not going to go with him”
It SHOULD be "Oh, okay. Nick, I'll talk to you later, I have to call Grissom and tell him that I am not going to go with him."
I like your premise, but just a couple things you might want to clean up:
Punctuation-proper use of periods, commas, semi-colons, etc.
Also, you do not need to put quotation marks around every sentance in the dialogue-one at the beginning of what the character says and one at the end:
You wrote-“Oh, okay” “Nick I’ll talk to you later” “I have to call Grissom and tell him that I am not going to go with him”
It SHOULD be "Oh, okay. Nick, I'll talk to you later, I have to call Grissom and tell him that I am not going to go with him."
7/18/2005 c15 Blondie
WOW!I just read all 15 chapters and I love it.And I want more!Please
WOW!I just read all 15 chapters and I love it.And I want more!Please
7/18/2005 c15 deletethisprofileplease
I adore the title! you are so creative! A boat, eh? well, i hope nothing bad happens! I wish in the chapter you would have put more about grissom, what he's up to and all. I know it's a S/N, but, well, yeah. :) Anyway, keep up the good work!
-Adrianna
I adore the title! you are so creative! A boat, eh? well, i hope nothing bad happens! I wish in the chapter you would have put more about grissom, what he's up to and all. I know it's a S/N, but, well, yeah. :) Anyway, keep up the good work!
-Adrianna
7/16/2005 c12 deletethisprofileplease
wow! i can't wait until you put up another chapter! it rocks!
-Adrianna
p.s: i like how you made the story a gcr!
wow! i can't wait until you put up another chapter! it rocks!
-Adrianna
p.s: i like how you made the story a gcr!
7/10/2005 c10 snickers
so much snickers love :D
so much snickers love :D
7/8/2005 c10 Adrianna Leiren
I really like the story so far! keep it up!
I really like the story so far! keep it up!
7/8/2005 c10 Eden Eyes
Keep up the good work, is it okay if I give you a hint? Instead of writing ' I am ' maybe make some into ' I'm ' and ' they are ' to ' they're ' it might read a little easier, but whatever you want is great! You are a very gifted writer!
Keep up the good work, is it okay if I give you a hint? Instead of writing ' I am ' maybe make some into ' I'm ' and ' they are ' to ' they're ' it might read a little easier, but whatever you want is great! You are a very gifted writer!
7/7/2005 c9 Eden Eyes
nice job, you are really coming along! Keep up the good work, you are doing great!
nice job, you are really coming along! Keep up the good work, you are doing great!
7/1/2005 c8 Eden Eyes
Loved it... so are Sara and Griss getting together in this, or is it a Nick and Sara, and ( all these questions lol) if Sara and Grissom get together, what will happen to Nick? What a mouth full, if you ever need help my email is keep up the great work!
Loved it... so are Sara and Griss getting together in this, or is it a Nick and Sara, and ( all these questions lol) if Sara and Grissom get together, what will happen to Nick? What a mouth full, if you ever need help my email is keep up the great work!
6/26/2005 c7 SildeGirl21
hey nice story keep it up!
hey nice story keep it up!