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1/15/2016 c2 16Redline57
This was nuts and made no sense. You should update it so I can read more.
10/15/2005 c2 1HardlyEverUpdates
Uptight? he wasn't angry at all.

Time of time, what are you talking about?

Beginning and end of time? wouldn't that be the end of time?

This is all very confusing.
6/25/2005 c1 HardlyEverUpdates
Before Crist but After his death?
6/21/2005 c2 9Radi Berra
Hmm... well, the story line is good, but the punctuation needs to be revised a bit. I got a bit confused because some phrases were running together, kinda, if that made any sense. Well, anyway, thanks for reviewing my story! I know it's Marle and not Marlee, but I always thought that Marle looked like it would rhyme with Carl, you know? If you want, I'll change it. I'm always listening to my readers' requests! If you want, e-mail me and tell me if I should change it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to some more of this (and another fic, maybe! ^_-)

6/18/2005 c1 4SuperAngel
Yeah! And I shall call you mugu gai pan

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