for Complicated Times10/15/2005 c2 
1HardlyEverUpdates
Uptight? he wasn't angry at all.
Time of time, what are you talking about?
Beginning and end of time? wouldn't that be the end of time?
This is all very confusing.
1HardlyEverUpdatesUptight? he wasn't angry at all.
Time of time, what are you talking about?
Beginning and end of time? wouldn't that be the end of time?
This is all very confusing.
6/21/2005 c2 9Radi Berra
Hmm... well, the story line is good, but the punctuation needs to be revised a bit. I got a bit confused because some phrases were running together, kinda, if that made any sense. Well, anyway, thanks for reviewing my story! I know it's Marle and not Marlee, but I always thought that Marle looked like it would rhyme with Carl, you know? If you want, I'll change it. I'm always listening to my readers' requests! If you want, e-mail me and tell me if I should change it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to some more of this (and another fic, maybe! ^_-)
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9Radi BerraHmm... well, the story line is good, but the punctuation needs to be revised a bit. I got a bit confused because some phrases were running together, kinda, if that made any sense. Well, anyway, thanks for reviewing my story! I know it's Marle and not Marlee, but I always thought that Marle looked like it would rhyme with Carl, you know? If you want, I'll change it. I'm always listening to my readers' requests! If you want, e-mail me and tell me if I should change it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to some more of this (and another fic, maybe! ^_-)
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