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Evil Fiona
Evil Fiona
7/11/2006 c2 
2DarkestxKorner
That story was sad!It was very good, though. I suggest that you use a little more commas.
2DarkestxKornerThat story was sad!It was very good, though. I suggest that you use a little more commas.
7/5/2005 c1 Shannon
You need to use paragraphs. I couldn't read it because there was only 3 paragraphs for something that should have been 6 or 7. You need to start a new paragraph every 3 to 4 sentences.
Sorry, do that and I might be able to read it!
You need to use paragraphs. I couldn't read it because there was only 3 paragraphs for something that should have been 6 or 7. You need to start a new paragraph every 3 to 4 sentences.
Sorry, do that and I might be able to read it!
6/27/2005 c1 Isadora Q. Aiken
Aww...that was really really good. So sad though. I loved it. I can't wait for a sequel.
-Chrissie
Aww...that was really really good. So sad though. I loved it. I can't wait for a sequel.
-Chrissie
6/25/2005 c1 iluvkb
YAY! THAT WAS SO GOOD!
YAY! THAT WAS SO GOOD!
6/20/2005 c1 8will-herm-simetra
Great Story!Please hurry up w/ the sequel. I thought there was going to be suicide...and yeah, I'd like to read ur HP stories too.
8will-herm-simetraGreat Story!Please hurry up w/ the sequel. I thought there was going to be suicide...and yeah, I'd like to read ur HP stories too.
6/19/2005 c1 16nicoli-boli
Aw...so sad! For a while I was thinking she would kill herself.
Can't wait for the sequal!
16nicoli-boliAw...so sad! For a while I was thinking she would kill herself.
Can't wait for the sequal!
6/19/2005 c1 Meghan
Ah. that was so sad! I 'm kinda happy you had that angle though. everyone else has Klaus hating Fiona . good job!
Ah. that was so sad! I 'm kinda happy you had that angle though. everyone else has Klaus hating Fiona . good job!
6/18/2005 c1 107Elphie Marky
That was sad. I thought Isadora was going to kill herself. Good story though.
107Elphie MarkyThat was sad. I thought Isadora was going to kill herself. Good story though.