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11/7/2007 c1 2Princess Geta
Good job on a first one! And like you said, you had done it so quickly so kudos! :)
8/15/2005 c1 17Xanaphia
wow I wanna know what's going on, but Baba has some nerve waking Vegeta up at that hour, it better be inportent or Vegeta well go all cross armed on her.
6/26/2005 c1 7sportschickVLVR
LOL! I literally laughed out loud when I saw the phrase "wrinkly old eyes"! Hahah. Well please continue. Maybe you can give me a sneak-peek online? ^_^ Jk. Well please continue now that I know your little creative juices are flowing again.
6/19/2005 c1 47Clarobell
Hey, good start! I thought the argument between Bulma and Vegeta wacking his head was so funny! Maybe he woke the kids...

The only thing you have to watch is the way you write your sentences, they can be a little confusing to read.

I hope you update soon!

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