for My Little Nucience4/9/2007 c3 
10orvida geri
i like this story so far when do you think you will have anymore chapters up and running i want to see how konzen interacts with goku. i've notice with all of these stories goku really doesn't have much of a memory from his prior life as far as i can tell which is weird in and of it's self why is that and humora being nice to him he must be after something from son goku.well looking forward to reading the next chapters real soon pls keep me posted if possible.
10orvida gerii like this story so far when do you think you will have anymore chapters up and running i want to see how konzen interacts with goku. i've notice with all of these stories goku really doesn't have much of a memory from his prior life as far as i can tell which is weird in and of it's self why is that and humora being nice to him he must be after something from son goku.well looking forward to reading the next chapters real soon pls keep me posted if possible.
8/24/2006 c3 Namassuki
Nan: -look at the date- AHH! You update on my birthday! Hoorey for me!
Xion9: Your birthday on 15? Why didn't you tell me?
Nan: Huh? YOU FORGOT?
Xion9: Er...
Nan: I'll deal with you later. Anyway I LOVE HOMURA! HEHEHEHE! CONTINUE!
Xion9: Shoot...
Nan: -look at the date- AHH! You update on my birthday! Hoorey for me!
Xion9: Your birthday on 15? Why didn't you tell me?
Nan: Huh? YOU FORGOT?
Xion9: Er...
Nan: I'll deal with you later. Anyway I LOVE HOMURA! HEHEHEHE! CONTINUE!
Xion9: Shoot...
12/4/2005 c1 5discarded account
You don't write that bad. I like your story, it's an unterresting AU. A little cliché, but I know it's difficult to avoid.
I can understand you'd want to make Sanzo and Goku brothers. I like yaoi too. But adopting somoene isn't like adopting some pet. You can't come and say : "Hello, I'd want some kid to play with my son!"
This thought disturbs me.
Please, don't take my comment the bad way.
Good luck with your fanfiction.
Kaoro
5discarded accountYou don't write that bad. I like your story, it's an unterresting AU. A little cliché, but I know it's difficult to avoid.
I can understand you'd want to make Sanzo and Goku brothers. I like yaoi too. But adopting somoene isn't like adopting some pet. You can't come and say : "Hello, I'd want some kid to play with my son!"
This thought disturbs me.
Please, don't take my comment the bad way.
Good luck with your fanfiction.
Kaoro
11/27/2005 c3 candy-chan
*-* 39! 39! YAY!
Aren´t they kyoot? I love them sosososososo much!
Keep writting, you!
and what about yaoi-ish scenes? Does this fic have them?
*-* 39! 39! YAY!
Aren´t they kyoot? I love them sosososososo much!
Keep writting, you!
and what about yaoi-ish scenes? Does this fic have them?
11/14/2005 c3 15Kai's kitty
it was so cute!I love Homura so much!as well as sanzo!
goku & sanzo will soon fall in love,ne?(please!)
by the way don't you wanna enter kougaiji in your story?
UPDATE SOON...
15Kai's kittyit was so cute!I love Homura so much!as well as sanzo!
goku & sanzo will soon fall in love,ne?(please!)
by the way don't you wanna enter kougaiji in your story?
UPDATE SOON...
10/26/2005 c1 19Honeydew92
fyi i am .neko.lirin. from gaia... i see that you are doing the whole "reincarnation" thing with your story, because Goku would still be 18. I like the way you used the old names ^^ also your school uniform is a little unconvential, it would normaly be a school colord blazer (or dress shirt) and slacks. But hey it is your story. good formath overall thoguh
19Honeydew92fyi i am .neko.lirin. from gaia... i see that you are doing the whole "reincarnation" thing with your story, because Goku would still be 18. I like the way you used the old names ^^ also your school uniform is a little unconvential, it would normaly be a school colord blazer (or dress shirt) and slacks. But hey it is your story. good formath overall thoguh
10/16/2005 c1 Bmisty157
The story was okay... Don't really know where the plot is going. You need to use spellcheck before you post your stories cause there were words that were missing letters. Not that anyone couldn't tell what word you were looking for. Its just makes the story harder to read if other readers out there couldn't figure out what you saying.
Take it as a bash to your ego if you want, but spellcheck is a friendly happy program when used properly. Ja ne.
The story was okay... Don't really know where the plot is going. You need to use spellcheck before you post your stories cause there were words that were missing letters. Not that anyone couldn't tell what word you were looking for. Its just makes the story harder to read if other readers out there couldn't figure out what you saying.
Take it as a bash to your ego if you want, but spellcheck is a friendly happy program when used properly. Ja ne.
8/8/2005 c2 HanaJaganshi
I really like the plot. It's a cute story, I can't wait to read more. Plus it's got one of my favorite parts of the whole anime in it! I love when Goku pulls out Konzen's hair! It's so funny! Konzen's step mom in this story reminds me of the merciful godess and it's funny to picture her as a mother! lol. Write more soon!
I really like the plot. It's a cute story, I can't wait to read more. Plus it's got one of my favorite parts of the whole anime in it! I love when Goku pulls out Konzen's hair! It's so funny! Konzen's step mom in this story reminds me of the merciful godess and it's funny to picture her as a mother! lol. Write more soon!
7/6/2005 c2 Goku-Chan
Hey, i love chapter! Goku is so cute, I love him
Hey, i love chapter! Goku is so cute, I love him
7/6/2005 c2 Goku-Chan
Hey, i love chapter! Goku is so cute, I love him
Hey, i love chapter! Goku is so cute, I love him