
1/9/2015 c3 Guest
... awesome
... awesome
12/1/2005 c3
4R Lucky Crayon
hmm... i found two errors in this chapter, with her gear in her bad, and with a few house of giving him this. just wanted to let you know. very good plot line and please continue updateing this story., it's on my alert list ^^
~Uma =^-^= ~

hmm... i found two errors in this chapter, with her gear in her bad, and with a few house of giving him this. just wanted to let you know. very good plot line and please continue updateing this story., it's on my alert list ^^
~Uma =^-^= ~
12/1/2005 c2 R Lucky Crayon
hm... you forgot the disclaimer, better put one in so somebody doesn't ban you, that would be sad cause this story is pretty good., oh way, and the script form isn't allowed either and some more detail please, thanks
~Uma =^-^= ~
hm... you forgot the disclaimer, better put one in so somebody doesn't ban you, that would be sad cause this story is pretty good., oh way, and the script form isn't allowed either and some more detail please, thanks
~Uma =^-^= ~
12/1/2005 c1 R Lucky Crayon
wow, i like this chapter, gonna go read the other chapters now, but good job so far.
wow, i like this chapter, gonna go read the other chapters now, but good job so far.
9/5/2005 c3
3Amy Spirit
GAH, WHEN WILL YOU POST MORE! T_T Please post more soon, its getting REALLY GOOD!

GAH, WHEN WILL YOU POST MORE! T_T Please post more soon, its getting REALLY GOOD!
8/24/2005 c2
22CelloSolo2007
okay DEFINITELY amdragjakelong. I am a TOTAL FANATIC of that show. Just look at my stories. ADJL ADJL ADJL ADJL and more ADJL! I'm totally OBSESSED!

okay DEFINITELY amdragjakelong. I am a TOTAL FANATIC of that show. Just look at my stories. ADJL ADJL ADJL ADJL and more ADJL! I'm totally OBSESSED!
7/30/2005 c2
3purrbaby101
Okay, I'm interested. And that's a good thing, believe me! Great job Allie, keep it up! ^^

Okay, I'm interested. And that's a good thing, believe me! Great job Allie, keep it up! ^^
7/15/2005 c2
3Amy Spirit
Cool. It sounds exactly like a combination of my first book, and the one i am yet to start. *narrows eyes* lol jk. It rocks! please continue. =D Cause if youdont. *makes fist* =P *takes out Peanut butter* *eats* *looks around at people staring at me* ...what? I dont have a problem o.o

Cool. It sounds exactly like a combination of my first book, and the one i am yet to start. *narrows eyes* lol jk. It rocks! please continue. =D Cause if youdont. *makes fist* =P *takes out Peanut butter* *eats* *looks around at people staring at me* ...what? I dont have a problem o.o
7/13/2005 c2
13Kanika Meskhenet
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more which means...UPDATE SUPER SOON!
*runs off with Danny* Buahahaha!

Awesome story! Can't wait to read more which means...UPDATE SUPER SOON!
*runs off with Danny* Buahahaha!
7/9/2005 c2 eternitys-shadow
dude, I have no idea what this could be a crossover with, but it is good and please continue soon or I will kill you with my flaming chainssaw (Is just kidding)
dude, I have no idea what this could be a crossover with, but it is good and please continue soon or I will kill you with my flaming chainssaw (Is just kidding)
7/8/2005 c2
4kitsune07
Ok, I have a guess of what crossover this is. THe whole "Huntsmaster and Huntsgirl" thing is American Dragon:Jake Long...
Am I right? Please Update soon!

Ok, I have a guess of what crossover this is. THe whole "Huntsmaster and Huntsgirl" thing is American Dragon:Jake Long...
Am I right? Please Update soon!
7/7/2005 c1 LatinWolfDemon
It's wonderful so far!...Please continiue! *your story made it's way into my faves^^*
It's wonderful so far!...Please continiue! *your story made it's way into my faves^^*
7/7/2005 c1
1Mythic Storm
Who is the executioner? I'd really like to know, please. Anyways, post more!

Who is the executioner? I'd really like to know, please. Anyways, post more!