for Visitation7/31/2006 c5 
10StarWonder09
This is probably one of the better stories I've read in a LONG time. Not to mention an original, well thought out idea. I’ll be waiting to read more of it. (I just hope it won't be seven months of a wait.)
10StarWonder09This is probably one of the better stories I've read in a LONG time. Not to mention an original, well thought out idea. I’ll be waiting to read more of it. (I just hope it won't be seven months of a wait.)
7/21/2006 c5 DracosDiva
Hahaha! Awesome! Wouldn't everyone like to punch the Visitor-who-wouldn't-leave a few times? :-D Now can you bring in Mr. Weasley? Or Tonks! Lol. keep going, tho!
Hahaha! Awesome! Wouldn't everyone like to punch the Visitor-who-wouldn't-leave a few times? :-D Now can you bring in Mr. Weasley? Or Tonks! Lol. keep going, tho!
6/5/2006 c4 23Rebel-Aquarius
*Sniggers, and then bursts out laughing.*
Oh my gosh, this is PERFECT! This fic is so funny, with the characters swooping in and arguing with you about what you wrote. (I had to keep switching back and forth between Aftermath and this, to make sure I understood what each of the characters were talking about-I kinda have to agree with Hermione, though. It WAS pretty cruel of you to kill off Mrs. Weasley...) Seriously, though: This is good, and I like it a lot (are there going to be more updates soon? PLEASEOHPLEASEOHPLEASE?_
-Later!
-Rebel
23Rebel-Aquarius*Sniggers, and then bursts out laughing.*
Oh my gosh, this is PERFECT! This fic is so funny, with the characters swooping in and arguing with you about what you wrote. (I had to keep switching back and forth between Aftermath and this, to make sure I understood what each of the characters were talking about-I kinda have to agree with Hermione, though. It WAS pretty cruel of you to kill off Mrs. Weasley...) Seriously, though: This is good, and I like it a lot (are there going to be more updates soon? PLEASEOHPLEASEOHPLEASE?_
-Later!
-Rebel
4/24/2006 c3 1justamoose
Hahaha that's it! Shove Malfoy's cowardice in his face! Oh, I shouldn't be that mean...nice story by the way, lol. Bring Voldemort in there next time! :-)
1justamooseHahaha that's it! Shove Malfoy's cowardice in his face! Oh, I shouldn't be that mean...nice story by the way, lol. Bring Voldemort in there next time! :-)
3/10/2006 c4 believer07747
hey yea i about my other stories, i don't really feel like finishing them. usually i don't plan my stories out. I kind of make it up as I go along. I like putting ironic twists, and I have myself stuck in such a situation that I don't know how to get out of it. In my Dear Diary story, I wish I didn't kill off Bobby. I basically don't know how the story will end up myself, and I don't know when I should end it yet.
I'm not a great harry potter fan myself, but I read your story and it's pretty interesting!
hey yea i about my other stories, i don't really feel like finishing them. usually i don't plan my stories out. I kind of make it up as I go along. I like putting ironic twists, and I have myself stuck in such a situation that I don't know how to get out of it. In my Dear Diary story, I wish I didn't kill off Bobby. I basically don't know how the story will end up myself, and I don't know when I should end it yet.
I'm not a great harry potter fan myself, but I read your story and it's pretty interesting!
9/20/2005 c1 2ThereWillBeLemons
hiya. i am so sorry that i havent updated for months! i moved house, then a family situation came up, then i got a boyfrined ( STILL HAVE HIM! HAHA!) and then iv been so busy. haha. soz
i'll be updating soon.
promise
cross my heart and hope to die. stick a needle in my eye.
luvz claire. x
2ThereWillBeLemonshiya. i am so sorry that i havent updated for months! i moved house, then a family situation came up, then i got a boyfrined ( STILL HAVE HIM! HAHA!) and then iv been so busy. haha. soz
i'll be updating soon.
promise
cross my heart and hope to die. stick a needle in my eye.
luvz claire. x
7/30/2005 c4 LunaShadows
poor poor Harry. I'm still in denial about Snape-though I accidentally spoiled the death when I was looking at the chapter pictures. |P
~Padfoot
poor poor Harry. I'm still in denial about Snape-though I accidentally spoiled the death when I was looking at the chapter pictures. |P
~Padfoot
7/19/2005 c4 21YelloWitchGrl
Very cool, incorporating HBP and all... do we get to explore what he's going to do with Ginny? If not, cool but that was really good.
You told us everything you needed to know by saying "raven haired boy" so that fixed it. As long as you give us a physical description, then us visual people will get it.
21YelloWitchGrlVery cool, incorporating HBP and all... do we get to explore what he's going to do with Ginny? If not, cool but that was really good.
You told us everything you needed to know by saying "raven haired boy" so that fixed it. As long as you give us a physical description, then us visual people will get it.
7/12/2005 c3 YelloWitchGrl
Okay, as far as I can tell you were talking about Malfoy, which is excellent bc I hate the ferret, but anyway, very interesting. PLEASE email me to let me know when you update again, author alerts get lost in the shuffle!
Okay, as far as I can tell you were talking about Malfoy, which is excellent bc I hate the ferret, but anyway, very interesting. PLEASE email me to let me know when you update again, author alerts get lost in the shuffle!
7/12/2005 c2 YelloWitchGrl
It was a little disjointed, the conversation I mean. Because it is in first person, it is hard to do sometimes but it would have helped to seperate each person's words into a new paragraph for each.
Also build up the "author's emotions" for him to cry. It seemed a bit premature.
Otherwise, besides my crits, I am very interested and I do like it! So on to the next chapter I go.
It was a little disjointed, the conversation I mean. Because it is in first person, it is hard to do sometimes but it would have helped to seperate each person's words into a new paragraph for each.
Also build up the "author's emotions" for him to cry. It seemed a bit premature.
Otherwise, besides my crits, I am very interested and I do like it! So on to the next chapter I go.
7/12/2005 c1 YelloWitchGrl
oo, so where are you going with this? I guess I'll find out soon. Sorry about not reviewing earlier, the phone line got cut so I had no internet.
oo, so where are you going with this? I guess I'll find out soon. Sorry about not reviewing earlier, the phone line got cut so I had no internet.
7/7/2005 c3 Nosilla
I had an awesome 4th of July, thanks. Fireworks are awesome.
“Ah, ah, you watch your language here,” I admonished, waving a finger in his face. “You’re in my home now, and seeing as I’m the author, while you’re here there will be no swearing. Is that clear?” I asked, getting in his face.
BWAHAHA! (Evil smile)
I had an awesome 4th of July, thanks. Fireworks are awesome.
“Ah, ah, you watch your language here,” I admonished, waving a finger in his face. “You’re in my home now, and seeing as I’m the author, while you’re here there will be no swearing. Is that clear?” I asked, getting in his face.
BWAHAHA! (Evil smile)
7/5/2005 c3 CrAzYaNdPsYcHo
lol poor malfoy! heh heh ur so evil...
btw i luv how dis character iz so sarcastic nd mean 2 ppl...lol
keep writin!
lol poor malfoy! heh heh ur so evil...
btw i luv how dis character iz so sarcastic nd mean 2 ppl...lol
keep writin!