7/22/2005 c1 Crookshanksforever
It was so sweet...
I liked it too much!
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
They need a kiss!
In real life it's ok, never kiss the first time. Make them wait. But this's a ff!
It was so sweet...
I liked it too much!
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
They need a kiss!
In real life it's ok, never kiss the first time. Make them wait. But this's a ff!
7/10/2005 c1 3grey topper
For me the bold and italics for when they were thinking was a little confusing because a couple times it mixed with the regular writing, but it was good. I kinda liked the fact that they didn't kiss...it made your story more unique
For me the bold and italics for when they were thinking was a little confusing because a couple times it mixed with the regular writing, but it was good. I kinda liked the fact that they didn't kiss...it made your story more unique