for It came from the manga!7/5/2005 c2 Dumb Kitty
It's really nice! I love it,but at the end of this chapter, Hiei seemed a bit out of character, but it was good!
It's really nice! I love it,but at the end of this chapter, Hiei seemed a bit out of character, but it was good!
7/5/2005 c2 akuavari
Hiei was so OOC just now. Oh well, I think its funny. And it's so fun to burn peoples hair! I did it to some idiot once. They scream in terror and pain.*sighs* music to my ears. Good Story!
Hiei was so OOC just now. Oh well, I think its funny. And it's so fun to burn peoples hair! I did it to some idiot once. They scream in terror and pain.*sighs* music to my ears. Good Story!
7/4/2005 c2 YukiYuri
Lol.I love it!Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lol.I love it!Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/3/2005 c2 
13Meibou
aww, poor shrimpy hentai got hit over the head by his luva-to-be. too bad. haha. update!
13Meibouaww, poor shrimpy hentai got hit over the head by his luva-to-be. too bad. haha. update!
7/3/2005 c2 Bishounen Obsessors
o.o Cool! ^.^ I like it. Personally, for me, it'd be Kurama who popped out of the manga.
Quick constructive criticism: Hiei's a little OOC. He needs to say "hn" more. And talk in complete sentences less. ^.^ Anyway, other than that, good story!
o.o Cool! ^.^ I like it. Personally, for me, it'd be Kurama who popped out of the manga.
Quick constructive criticism: Hiei's a little OOC. He needs to say "hn" more. And talk in complete sentences less. ^.^ Anyway, other than that, good story!
6/30/2005 c1 Dumb Kitty
It was BAD! Heh... Jk... I loved it! It was really nice and fun! Update soon or I'll Hurt you... Ok... Maybe not... But if you don't, I'll be really sad! Ok then, Ja Ne!
It was BAD! Heh... Jk... I loved it! It was really nice and fun! Update soon or I'll Hurt you... Ok... Maybe not... But if you don't, I'll be really sad! Ok then, Ja Ne!
6/29/2005 c1 10Icefire2
Hm, definitely one I haven't heard of before, different but very interesting. I hope to see how things work out.
10Icefire2Hm, definitely one I haven't heard of before, different but very interesting. I hope to see how things work out.
6/29/2005 c1 akuavari
This isn't a flame, but you could use it to build up your fire. Anywhat-sits I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry up,Onegai! Arigato! ^_^
This isn't a flame, but you could use it to build up your fire. Anywhat-sits I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry up,Onegai! Arigato! ^_^