for Love and Lose7/24/2005 c1 Bite Me
Kinda difficult to read but I like it.Um,there are other ships than Clana,not everyone likes Clana,so PA leez,unless you were talking about you giving reviews how do you know that more Clana means more reviews? I'm just saying.I don't like Clana and I'm reviewing,I'm Clois and Chlark.Oh yeah,and if you come back with some stupid "Clana 4eva,chlark and clois should die" stuff,I don't care.Cause eventually Clark leaves Smallville and goes to Metropolis and marries Lois.So now I suppose you don't want him to be Superman so he can be with Lana? Well hate to break it to ya,that ain't gonna hapen,Smallville is about Clark becoming Superman not Clark becoming the perfect guy for Lana.Its not about Clana or Lana its about Clark becoming Superman.I'm saying this cause all you Clanas seem to think its Lanaville or Clanaville,and when Clana doesn't happen you through fits like litle babies cause you didn't get what you want,well boo-hoo,too bad.
Kinda difficult to read but I like it.Um,there are other ships than Clana,not everyone likes Clana,so PA leez,unless you were talking about you giving reviews how do you know that more Clana means more reviews? I'm just saying.I don't like Clana and I'm reviewing,I'm Clois and Chlark.Oh yeah,and if you come back with some stupid "Clana 4eva,chlark and clois should die" stuff,I don't care.Cause eventually Clark leaves Smallville and goes to Metropolis and marries Lois.So now I suppose you don't want him to be Superman so he can be with Lana? Well hate to break it to ya,that ain't gonna hapen,Smallville is about Clark becoming Superman not Clark becoming the perfect guy for Lana.Its not about Clana or Lana its about Clark becoming Superman.I'm saying this cause all you Clanas seem to think its Lanaville or Clanaville,and when Clana doesn't happen you through fits like litle babies cause you didn't get what you want,well boo-hoo,too bad.
7/8/2005 c1 Katy
write more please
write more please
7/7/2005 c1 
2WinterSharn
Nice start tho your writting style is a bit difficult to read. Otherwise I am enjoying it so far! Oh and one question is this Ryan as in Ryan James who supposidly died from a brain tumor or a different Ryan. Just curious. Please continue soon.
2WinterSharnNice start tho your writting style is a bit difficult to read. Otherwise I am enjoying it so far! Oh and one question is this Ryan as in Ryan James who supposidly died from a brain tumor or a different Ryan. Just curious. Please continue soon.
7/4/2005 c1 cktwlvr
i think it will make a good story. umm not trying to be mean but can you type alittle better i barley could make sense of it. but other than that it was pretty good.
i think it will make a good story. umm not trying to be mean but can you type alittle better i barley could make sense of it. but other than that it was pretty good.
7/1/2005 c1 PA leese
It was kind of confusing because sometimes you used quotations for dialouge and others you didn't. Also it was extremly short and the fact that you spaced it in, made it even more short. The spelling and grammer needs to be reviewed. I like where you are headed with this. I love clana. Adding more clana will help you get more reviews. I am so sick of Jonathan either dying or getting sick in every fic i've read. Be a little more original. I can name at least 10 fics that are similar to this. Sorry if that sounded like a flame; it's not. Please continue.
It was kind of confusing because sometimes you used quotations for dialouge and others you didn't. Also it was extremly short and the fact that you spaced it in, made it even more short. The spelling and grammer needs to be reviewed. I like where you are headed with this. I love clana. Adding more clana will help you get more reviews. I am so sick of Jonathan either dying or getting sick in every fic i've read. Be a little more original. I can name at least 10 fics that are similar to this. Sorry if that sounded like a flame; it's not. Please continue.