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3/20/2006 c1 11KupoWrath
...*pokes* This story shows some potential... Surely you don't plan to stop it there? There's so much you can do with this! My only suggestions...

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That's what separates a good story from a great story...

I look forward to more! ^_^

~Kupo~

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