for Fireworks10/23/2005 c2 
2Fenikkusu Koi
hehe! this is so cute! i like it alot! thanks for writing! and i think ill email you soon with some sort of idea. yay! thanks again!
2Fenikkusu Koihehe! this is so cute! i like it alot! thanks for writing! and i think ill email you soon with some sort of idea. yay! thanks again!
8/13/2005 c2 112Aya Diefair
Very nice for a first story. Short, sweet, and to the point. Cute title for it as well, having an American holiday thrown in was really unique. Thanks for all your support and reviews on my story and keep up the good work!
I am off to read more! Hai, hai!
~Mijn Schaduw~
-Measha
112Aya DiefairVery nice for a first story. Short, sweet, and to the point. Cute title for it as well, having an American holiday thrown in was really unique. Thanks for all your support and reviews on my story and keep up the good work!
I am off to read more! Hai, hai!
~Mijn Schaduw~
-Measha
7/22/2005 c1 2Akea
Yeah it was suppose to be yuki surprises shuichi with the tickets. I can't type anymore cause I'm getting tired
2AkeaYeah it was suppose to be yuki surprises shuichi with the tickets. I can't type anymore cause I'm getting tired
7/22/2005 c2 Akea
The story was wonderful. It made me smile. The end paragraph was...yeah I'm sure you know what I mean but other than that it was great. Here's an idea for another story. How about Yuki surprises Yuki with tickets to Tokyo Disney since he always want to go or you could draw information from when they did go to T.D. in the manga/anime. But know I've given myself an idea. And again thanks for the story.
The story was wonderful. It made me smile. The end paragraph was...yeah I'm sure you know what I mean but other than that it was great. Here's an idea for another story. How about Yuki surprises Yuki with tickets to Tokyo Disney since he always want to go or you could draw information from when they did go to T.D. in the manga/anime. But know I've given myself an idea. And again thanks for the story.
7/9/2005 c2 63basket-of-posies
Sorta OOC **Out of character, just incase ya didn't know, took me a while to find out... hehe** for Yuki, but I like it. Gah, the secretiveness with the whispering was good! Makes people wanna know more. =P Lol, keep up the good work
63basket-of-posiesSorta OOC **Out of character, just incase ya didn't know, took me a while to find out... hehe** for Yuki, but I like it. Gah, the secretiveness with the whispering was good! Makes people wanna know more. =P Lol, keep up the good work
7/9/2005 c2 Lari-senpai
Cute story! Shu really went all out for Yuki. ^_^ Keep it up, I can't wait to read more of your work.
Cute story! Shu really went all out for Yuki. ^_^ Keep it up, I can't wait to read more of your work.
7/7/2005 c2 24Kitty in the Box
i always love fireworks and you got a great title for a story although honestly this fic is fluff and i like fluff but i'm a bit confused with your fic. i couldnt quite reach this point of feeling in my heart to squeal in delight or something.
24Kitty in the Boxi always love fireworks and you got a great title for a story although honestly this fic is fluff and i like fluff but i'm a bit confused with your fic. i couldnt quite reach this point of feeling in my heart to squeal in delight or something.
7/6/2005 c2 2pikapikaryuchan
Good ending I liked it. You really should keep it up I'd give you an idea but I can't think of anything, maybe that's why I haven't finished my own fic. Well I hope someone else gives you a good idea or you come up with one because I really want to read something else from you!
2pikapikaryuchanGood ending I liked it. You really should keep it up I'd give you an idea but I can't think of anything, maybe that's why I haven't finished my own fic. Well I hope someone else gives you a good idea or you come up with one because I really want to read something else from you!
7/5/2005 c1 Roentgen Ray
Not bad for a first time fic. As they say, 'practice makes perfect.' Keep on writing more and your style will improve- always pay attention to grammar and punctuation; these elements can help make a story or destroy it. Eh, I hope you didn't mind me saying that. :] Anyway, thanks for your review on my gravi fic, the companion to which is up now, if you're interested. Take care and I hope your ankle gets better soon.
Not bad for a first time fic. As they say, 'practice makes perfect.' Keep on writing more and your style will improve- always pay attention to grammar and punctuation; these elements can help make a story or destroy it. Eh, I hope you didn't mind me saying that. :] Anyway, thanks for your review on my gravi fic, the companion to which is up now, if you're interested. Take care and I hope your ankle gets better soon.
7/5/2005 c1 11TheSiner
Fireworks? Ha, ha... *blushes*
This is cute. Of course you should go on! Writing is great pleasure. Just find a good idea and do it. And try to include more detail. By the way - I like north Carolina. I was staying at Outer Banks - Kitty Hawk last summer.
11TheSinerFireworks? Ha, ha... *blushes*
This is cute. Of course you should go on! Writing is great pleasure. Just find a good idea and do it. And try to include more detail. By the way - I like north Carolina. I was staying at Outer Banks - Kitty Hawk last summer.
7/5/2005 c1 6shuxyuki
I like! You should continue! ...But it was kind of short and you could add more detail (just giving a suggestion)
Write more!
6shuxyukiI like! You should continue! ...But it was kind of short and you could add more detail (just giving a suggestion)
Write more!
7/5/2005 c1 25XxXMayhemXxX
Fire works are fun...^_^
Good stuff! You should continue to write. It'll give you something to do.
Mayhem's Angel
25XxXMayhemXxXFire works are fun...^_^
Good stuff! You should continue to write. It'll give you something to do.
Mayhem's Angel
7/5/2005 c1 2pikapikaryuchan
Cute story. It's a little short but for a first time try I thought the story was good. Things don't have to be fifty pages long to get the point across but I think in the future you should try to lengthen the story if possible. The way you linked the Fourth into the story instead of just having them randomly celebrating an American holliday was great. I think you should keep it up I'll definitly read anything you post!
2pikapikaryuchanCute story. It's a little short but for a first time try I thought the story was good. Things don't have to be fifty pages long to get the point across but I think in the future you should try to lengthen the story if possible. The way you linked the Fourth into the story instead of just having them randomly celebrating an American holliday was great. I think you should keep it up I'll definitly read anything you post!