11/14/2014 c1 174EvilFuzzy9
Wooow, a recently updated fic that has been on this site longer than I have. Don't see many of those floating around anymore.
(yaaaay, LeeTen is one of my secret Naruto ships)
Wooow, a recently updated fic that has been on this site longer than I have. Don't see many of those floating around anymore.
(yaaaay, LeeTen is one of my secret Naruto ships)
10/19/2011 c7 Shikatema fan 3
UPDATE btw was lee and tenten there when nejisaku were drunkily making oout :3 n also 333 the story NEJI IS SOOO HAWT!
Lee is super cute KyYYWWAAAAA!
Luv it!
UPDATE SOOOON PLX!
UPDATE btw was lee and tenten there when nejisaku were drunkily making oout :3 n also 333 the story NEJI IS SOOO HAWT!
Lee is super cute KyYYWWAAAAA!
Luv it!
UPDATE SOOOON PLX!
8/22/2009 c5 blahblahblahx3
oh hell no
you did not just do that! why is up with evil authors and the cliffies! gr... D:
haha jk jk but yeah please update soon you havent in like over a year and it seriously truely breaks my little heart:)
but yeah great fic and go nejisakusasu 3
oh hell no
you did not just do that! why is up with evil authors and the cliffies! gr... D:
haha jk jk but yeah please update soon you havent in like over a year and it seriously truely breaks my little heart:)
but yeah great fic and go nejisakusasu 3
12/12/2008 c7 hotneji24
lol the more i read the better the story and your daily threats get. This story is awesome and its not a lovey-dovey fic which i like i've been looking for a good nejisakusasu fic 4 the longest while and i'm glad i found this one your an awesome writer and words can't explain how good this story is can't wait 4 the next chapter.
*banana*
lol the more i read the better the story and your daily threats get. This story is awesome and its not a lovey-dovey fic which i like i've been looking for a good nejisakusasu fic 4 the longest while and i'm glad i found this one your an awesome writer and words can't explain how good this story is can't wait 4 the next chapter.
*banana*
1/31/2008 c7 16SmilingArtist
I really hope that the final pairing is NejiSaku and LeeTen.
Update please!
I really hope that the final pairing is NejiSaku and LeeTen.
Update please!
12/6/2007 c7 obsessivity
actually it means The Flower Of Dancing ._. im part french i should know, those translating programs never work D:
i LOVE ur story btw IT'S AWSOME! x3 update Ai Es Ai Pee!
PRETTY PLLZ? WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? @.@" UPDATE ASAP!
actually it means The Flower Of Dancing ._. im part french i should know, those translating programs never work D:
i LOVE ur story btw IT'S AWSOME! x3 update Ai Es Ai Pee!
PRETTY PLLZ? WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? @.@" UPDATE ASAP!
11/23/2007 c7 1tuneless.melody
lol. I love this story and your humor as well. =P Chya, can't want to read the next chapter. Though, I really hope that the fic doesn't end SasuSaku. Meh, whatever it is, it will be really good. =D
lol. I love this story and your humor as well. =P Chya, can't want to read the next chapter. Though, I really hope that the fic doesn't end SasuSaku. Meh, whatever it is, it will be really good. =D
10/31/2007 c7 Zora Olsen
Yay! your threats are back...Firstly, i have that problem with Uchiha Sasuke, you just need to hit him one and tell him to stay down...this should not be a sasusaku fic. By all means have sasusaku moments and all, how ever far you want to go...but do not make this a sasusaku ending, otherwise your threats may be returned to you :)...but you can do what you want, its your fic...just don't make it a sasu saku okay :|.
As far as lemons go, go ahead if you want, but i would advise a change in the rating. i do usually prefer angsty, dark M rated fics, because i'm a meanie...so agood idea in my view. And Yes..you need to get away from the humour, don't let it tempt you, move to a darker themed fic...but perhaps it is too late for you, you've been consumed by the light :( ... your too good..
Anywho update soon.
Yay! your threats are back...Firstly, i have that problem with Uchiha Sasuke, you just need to hit him one and tell him to stay down...this should not be a sasusaku fic. By all means have sasusaku moments and all, how ever far you want to go...but do not make this a sasusaku ending, otherwise your threats may be returned to you :)...but you can do what you want, its your fic...just don't make it a sasu saku okay :|.
As far as lemons go, go ahead if you want, but i would advise a change in the rating. i do usually prefer angsty, dark M rated fics, because i'm a meanie...so agood idea in my view. And Yes..you need to get away from the humour, don't let it tempt you, move to a darker themed fic...but perhaps it is too late for you, you've been consumed by the light :( ... your too good..
Anywho update soon.
10/31/2007 c6 Zora Olsen
Stupid thing wouldn't let me review the last chap, stating that i'd already done it...and low and behold, i actually did, a very long time ago. I was going to state that your threats were actually quite endearing (does that make you feel better?)..but i kinda miss them. I think in most fics OOCness is completely inevitable basically because these situations would never occur and never have occured in the manga...so i can completely understand your difficulty with that...unless that wasn't what you were intending. I think Neji's nature being this evil would work in a more darker fic...it does kinda seem that you are torn between humour and angst when it comes to Sakura and Neji, i would go for the latter, i thin k it would work much better, as neji and sasuke are basically evil S.O.B's, who hardly ever smile or laugh...ramble...ramble...ramble
Stupid thing wouldn't let me review the last chap, stating that i'd already done it...and low and behold, i actually did, a very long time ago. I was going to state that your threats were actually quite endearing (does that make you feel better?)..but i kinda miss them. I think in most fics OOCness is completely inevitable basically because these situations would never occur and never have occured in the manga...so i can completely understand your difficulty with that...unless that wasn't what you were intending. I think Neji's nature being this evil would work in a more darker fic...it does kinda seem that you are torn between humour and angst when it comes to Sakura and Neji, i would go for the latter, i thin k it would work much better, as neji and sasuke are basically evil S.O.B's, who hardly ever smile or laugh...ramble...ramble...ramble
10/31/2007 c4 Zora Olsen
Is he going to kill her with the kunai...or kill himself...maybe there'll be a Uchiha type massacre in the village...this is the questions that would have proded through my mind had i not already read it once...about your threats...Perhaps Ibiki should utilise some of them to get information out of enemies, they'd work darn well...
Is he going to kill her with the kunai...or kill himself...maybe there'll be a Uchiha type massacre in the village...this is the questions that would have proded through my mind had i not already read it once...about your threats...Perhaps Ibiki should utilise some of them to get information out of enemies, they'd work darn well...
10/31/2007 c3 Zora Olsen
Hehe...i like Neji in this fic, he's obviously ooc (not a criticism), but i likes him anyway despite his sadistic nature creeping through.
Hehe...i like Neji in this fic, he's obviously ooc (not a criticism), but i likes him anyway despite his sadistic nature creeping through.
10/31/2007 c2 Zora Olsen
Yes, your threat was very disturbing and made me rush to review, because that would be my worst nightmare. As far as other pairings go, i don't care, but the less you have of them the better. I also realised that the genre is Romance/Drama...all this time i thought it was humour...but humour never hurt anyone, or did it...yes, next chapter
Yes, your threat was very disturbing and made me rush to review, because that would be my worst nightmare. As far as other pairings go, i don't care, but the less you have of them the better. I also realised that the genre is Romance/Drama...all this time i thought it was humour...but humour never hurt anyone, or did it...yes, next chapter
10/31/2007 c1 Zora Olsen
I've read this fic before, but decided to re read since its been a long time. I don't like the Neji tenten pairing, so hooray for the end of that. I don't usually like first person narratives...but since you have a mix of point of views i guess i'm okay with it..but just for the point of reviewing, i'll say that perhaps you should just leave it at third person view...that's my very bias opinion :)
I've read this fic before, but decided to re read since its been a long time. I don't like the Neji tenten pairing, so hooray for the end of that. I don't usually like first person narratives...but since you have a mix of point of views i guess i'm okay with it..but just for the point of reviewing, i'll say that perhaps you should just leave it at third person view...that's my very bias opinion :)