7/1/2017 c10 1E.Richtofen
I enjoyed reading every chapter, the fights were good enough for me and the dialogue was perfect in encapsulating the characters personality. Your story had a good flow to it, and I cant wait to read part 2 and 3.

10/21/2015 c10 22Shinobi Gatana
They held back? Wow.

10/21/2015 c8 Shinobi Gatana
Holy sweet mother of Kishimoto-sensei! That was awesome!

10/21/2015 c6 Shinobi Gatana
Ah. This chapter was super sweet. And Good job on the interactions between Hinata and Sakura. :)

10/21/2015 c4 Shinobi Gatana
Ut oh.

10/20/2015 c2 Shinobi Gatana
It's nice that Hinata's mom is around in this version. :)

8/9/2013 c10 wesleycharles
Another great fight narration here. You have presented Hinata as a sweet person but tough and skilled as a ninja, just as she is in the manga too. This is a wonderful story. I will look for the next in the series. Thanks for writing.