for Spirit Talker6/17/2007 c4 othergirls
Poor Richie. *snicker* He's having issues with technology withdrawal. (A snicker is a quiet laugh. Like when you find something really funny and you don't want to laugh at whatever it is this quiet chuckle sometimes escapes you. a laugh that you're trying to control/hide. That's a snicker. Not the candy bar.)
Poor Richie. *snicker* He's having issues with technology withdrawal. (A snicker is a quiet laugh. Like when you find something really funny and you don't want to laugh at whatever it is this quiet chuckle sometimes escapes you. a laugh that you're trying to control/hide. That's a snicker. Not the candy bar.)
8/8/2005 c3 
3Sorceress Ivy
Forgive me I meant Native American. However, If you wish to be that finicky perhaps I should call them indigenous tribal people of the north american continent? I hope other than that type-o your enjoying my story.
-Ivy @~~}~
3Sorceress IvyForgive me I meant Native American. However, If you wish to be that finicky perhaps I should call them indigenous tribal people of the north american continent? I hope other than that type-o your enjoying my story.
-Ivy @~~}~
8/8/2005 c1 Jurt
I didn't realize that there was an Indian tribe called the Hopi, I thought for some odd reason that they were a Native American tribe.
I didn't realize that there was an Indian tribe called the Hopi, I thought for some odd reason that they were a Native American tribe.
8/6/2005 c3 4Mrs.Moony86
Awesome chapter! I wonder what Catori's next encounter with the "lady in white" will be... Can't wait for more!
4Mrs.Moony86Awesome chapter! I wonder what Catori's next encounter with the "lady in white" will be... Can't wait for more!
8/6/2005 c2 Mrs.Moony86
Very interesting! Who did Cat's job? Hm... Well another great chapter. Iris sounds like an absoulte joy! ::grins evily:: whoever could have inspired her? LOL. J/K. Well anyway... another wonderful chapter! Keep up the great work!
Very interesting! Who did Cat's job? Hm... Well another great chapter. Iris sounds like an absoulte joy! ::grins evily:: whoever could have inspired her? LOL. J/K. Well anyway... another wonderful chapter! Keep up the great work!
7/15/2005 c1 3Sorceress Ivy
First off thank you Draco and Totally for your reviews I enjoy them very much. Totally I appreciate your spacing recommendation. I haven't really noticed since I get caught up in my own writing and automatically post it sometimes without even editing it. I appologize for the cramped look to it. I will remedy this in the next chapter. I also appreciate that you liked my names and their meanings. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.
Thanks for the reviews,
Sorceress Ivy @~~}~
3Sorceress IvyFirst off thank you Draco and Totally for your reviews I enjoy them very much. Totally I appreciate your spacing recommendation. I haven't really noticed since I get caught up in my own writing and automatically post it sometimes without even editing it. I appologize for the cramped look to it. I will remedy this in the next chapter. I also appreciate that you liked my names and their meanings. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.
Thanks for the reviews,
Sorceress Ivy @~~}~
7/15/2005 c1 10totallystellar
I like your beginning. The aspect of the Indian "powers" (I don't like that word in this context because it seems too crass for the actual abilities of Catori and everyone...). The whole reaccurring "deer" meaning in the names is neat! I love name meanings. It's a quirk I have.
The only real problem I have with your fic isn't about your writing or anything (you seem like a good writer from what I've seen so far ^_^), it's just that all the dialogue and everything is squashed together into two paragraphs. All you have to do is space it out and it'll be easier to read and longer too.
If you need help or a beta or something, just get in touch and I can see what I can do for you. ^_^ I could beta or I know some people who would be happy to beta for you.
I'm looking forward to Gear and Static's part in this fic... UN students, that's something new. ^_^ I like uniqueness. I guess Catori will have a romance with one of them? Please don't be Virgil/Richie slash. v_v That would totally unmake my day.
Okay, this is a long review. XD But I'm bored and I think you'll appreciate the length. XD
Keep it up. ^_^
10totallystellarI like your beginning. The aspect of the Indian "powers" (I don't like that word in this context because it seems too crass for the actual abilities of Catori and everyone...). The whole reaccurring "deer" meaning in the names is neat! I love name meanings. It's a quirk I have.
The only real problem I have with your fic isn't about your writing or anything (you seem like a good writer from what I've seen so far ^_^), it's just that all the dialogue and everything is squashed together into two paragraphs. All you have to do is space it out and it'll be easier to read and longer too.
If you need help or a beta or something, just get in touch and I can see what I can do for you. ^_^ I could beta or I know some people who would be happy to beta for you.
I'm looking forward to Gear and Static's part in this fic... UN students, that's something new. ^_^ I like uniqueness. I guess Catori will have a romance with one of them? Please don't be Virgil/Richie slash. v_v That would totally unmake my day.
Okay, this is a long review. XD But I'm bored and I think you'll appreciate the length. XD
Keep it up. ^_^
7/14/2005 c1 4Mrs.Moony86
Great fic so far! I loved the bambi boy part... Catori seems like an intresting person. Please update soon. I love it.
4Mrs.Moony86Great fic so far! I loved the bambi boy part... Catori seems like an intresting person. Please update soon. I love it.