9/28/2005 c1 2Chibi Kumagoro
(In response to your last review)
Thanks again for another review! ^-^
Well, you see, I'm trying to somehow tie this all together and it's not going so well really. Because I don't revise/edit them at all either! I just type it up and that's what'cha get. So sorry for the confusing parts, stupid parts, etc. And to answer your first question-no. I just haven't figured out this whole thing yet. Heh, bad me. I don't like making "rough drafts" etc. Just sit down, type it up, done! Well, that might end up the case...I'm not sure yet. By the way, I won't be able to add any new chapters until Sunday. But I might not be able to put one up on Sunday. I'll try to get at least one more tomorrow, and then it's my trip thingy so I'll be gone for a couple days. Hm...Maybe slightly depressed? *Sweatdrop* I guess I really can't answer questions too well...I'll try to tie it all together soon if I can or come up with some-thi-ng! Okay? So-o-o sorry about the erm, issues in my fic! ('.')
And sorry this was so long! And it's probably bad to berate myself so much but I seem to do that a lot (like, a lot sometimes uh, whatever!) _
Got to go do my Geography homework. EW!
(In response to your last review)
Thanks again for another review! ^-^
Well, you see, I'm trying to somehow tie this all together and it's not going so well really. Because I don't revise/edit them at all either! I just type it up and that's what'cha get. So sorry for the confusing parts, stupid parts, etc. And to answer your first question-no. I just haven't figured out this whole thing yet. Heh, bad me. I don't like making "rough drafts" etc. Just sit down, type it up, done! Well, that might end up the case...I'm not sure yet. By the way, I won't be able to add any new chapters until Sunday. But I might not be able to put one up on Sunday. I'll try to get at least one more tomorrow, and then it's my trip thingy so I'll be gone for a couple days. Hm...Maybe slightly depressed? *Sweatdrop* I guess I really can't answer questions too well...I'll try to tie it all together soon if I can or come up with some-thi-ng! Okay? So-o-o sorry about the erm, issues in my fic! ('.')
And sorry this was so long! And it's probably bad to berate myself so much but I seem to do that a lot (like, a lot sometimes uh, whatever!) _
Got to go do my Geography homework. EW!
8/13/2005 c1 112Aya Diefair
Very cute! I love how the POV is in a little girls eyes. I love how you went through her toddler age and the way it was described was like a natural toddler way. Cute job, now to continue on with more reading!
*schruffles off to do so*
~Mijn Schaduw~
-Measha
Very cute! I love how the POV is in a little girls eyes. I love how you went through her toddler age and the way it was described was like a natural toddler way. Cute job, now to continue on with more reading!
*schruffles off to do so*
~Mijn Schaduw~
-Measha
8/12/2005 c3 1crazyinmind
I know everyone has said this, but that was unbelievably cute! X3 you've got a toddler down! Good job
I know everyone has said this, but that was unbelievably cute! X3 you've got a toddler down! Good job
7/20/2005 c1 Raserei Hojo
I really like this story. It's sweet! My advice (which you of course don't have to listen to) is to add a bit more to the summary. There were just a few spelling errors, but other than that it was great.
I really like this story. It's sweet! My advice (which you of course don't have to listen to) is to add a bit more to the summary. There were just a few spelling errors, but other than that it was great.
7/20/2005 c2 Skeletal Sammy
how cute! i think it's funny how Saki calls the wedding "Uncle Ryu and Tat talking to each other". That definately sounds like something a five year old would say. Keep up the story! xOx Yuki N Shuichi 4Eva
how cute! i think it's funny how Saki calls the wedding "Uncle Ryu and Tat talking to each other". That definately sounds like something a five year old would say. Keep up the story! xOx Yuki N Shuichi 4Eva
7/16/2005 c1 Amethyst-eyed Koneko
Aww! That was so cute! A bit sugary in places (Well, it is a toddler's perspective after all!) but still cute! :D I'm anxious so read about Ryu and Tat's wedding! (I love you, Ryu-chan!) ^_^x
Aww! That was so cute! A bit sugary in places (Well, it is a toddler's perspective after all!) but still cute! :D I'm anxious so read about Ryu and Tat's wedding! (I love you, Ryu-chan!) ^_^x
7/16/2005 c1 Skeletal Sammy
Aww it's so kawaii! Very cute love the story! It's not over yet is it? You should definatley add more chapters about her teen years and stuff! Well that's all for now! Cute story! Thanks for reviewing my sotries! xOx Yuki N Shuichi 4Eva
Aww it's so kawaii! Very cute love the story! It's not over yet is it? You should definatley add more chapters about her teen years and stuff! Well that's all for now! Cute story! Thanks for reviewing my sotries! xOx Yuki N Shuichi 4Eva
7/16/2005 c1 6SpunkElement
Aw...that was so cute! You did a good job! -hugs- My sister, who read over my shoulder(I really hate that), started to cry...Okay. I'm done! Cya!
Aw...that was so cute! You did a good job! -hugs- My sister, who read over my shoulder(I really hate that), started to cry...Okay. I'm done! Cya!