for It's Tough To Be Me4/20/2021 c20 Killa
Type your review write up. Loved d way u potrayed the characters. Pls reduce d coke.
Type your review write up. Loved d way u potrayed the characters. Pls reduce d coke.
8/28/2018 c14 Krusher
I'm quite sure nobody would fault Beast Boy for killing Dr. Light after he'd shot him eleven times moments before.
I'm quite sure nobody would fault Beast Boy for killing Dr. Light after he'd shot him eleven times moments before.
8/10/2018 c13 
1Historian1912
Life tip: stop worrying about offending anyone. All you'll do is stress yourself out and fail anyway. Example: I'm slightly offended that you're apologizing for everything as if there's something to be ashamed of. It doesn't make you seem very strong in your convictions. I almost stopped reading because you've apologized for things three chapters in a row, drawing extra attention to any potential issues. You even apologized for FACTS (female mammals usually being smaller than male) for crying out loud.
1Historian1912Life tip: stop worrying about offending anyone. All you'll do is stress yourself out and fail anyway. Example: I'm slightly offended that you're apologizing for everything as if there's something to be ashamed of. It doesn't make you seem very strong in your convictions. I almost stopped reading because you've apologized for things three chapters in a row, drawing extra attention to any potential issues. You even apologized for FACTS (female mammals usually being smaller than male) for crying out loud.
8/10/2018 c11 Historian1912
Yes, I know this is more than a decade old, but I thought I'd answer your question (in case no one else ever did). Convicted felons can't own firearms unless they're pardoned. There are also licenses in many states that must be obtained for carrying a handgun. By the way, the correct terms are 'round' rather than 'shot' and 'magazine' rather than 'clip'. A magazine is what is loaded into many pistols and rifles. A clip is something you load into an M1 rifle (the main US rifle for WW2) or the Lee-Enfield (main rifle for British and Commonwealth forces during both world wars).
Yes, I know this is more than a decade old, but I thought I'd answer your question (in case no one else ever did). Convicted felons can't own firearms unless they're pardoned. There are also licenses in many states that must be obtained for carrying a handgun. By the way, the correct terms are 'round' rather than 'shot' and 'magazine' rather than 'clip'. A magazine is what is loaded into many pistols and rifles. A clip is something you load into an M1 rifle (the main US rifle for WW2) or the Lee-Enfield (main rifle for British and Commonwealth forces during both world wars).
12/23/2017 c1 KJsmileyface
the retelling of the same scene from a different POV is confusing and redundant. Try having an omnipotent PIC where we get both at the same time so there's no need to switch
the retelling of the same scene from a different POV is confusing and redundant. Try having an omnipotent PIC where we get both at the same time so there's no need to switch
12/1/2017 c3 Cosmic Nihilist
The constant shifting of perpective and retelling of a scene we just witnessed is getting a bit disorienting and pulling attention away from the story. Regardless, well written with good grammar and thought towards progression so i will continue and hope that this is just a temporary thing to help show the confusion they are in.
The constant shifting of perpective and retelling of a scene we just witnessed is getting a bit disorienting and pulling attention away from the story. Regardless, well written with good grammar and thought towards progression so i will continue and hope that this is just a temporary thing to help show the confusion they are in.
10/9/2017 c20 Guest
I know I'm 12 years late to read this but, damn it! This good!
I know I'm 12 years late to read this but, damn it! This good!
12/27/2016 c11 Krusher
I kinda feel like Dr. Light is almost justified in wanting to take out Raven. He only wants to because of what she did to him and if he feels as if he is haunted by her all the time then it's her fault really.
I kinda feel like Dr. Light is almost justified in wanting to take out Raven. He only wants to because of what she did to him and if he feels as if he is haunted by her all the time then it's her fault really.
1/7/2016 c20 ReikoAmasawa13
This was an amazing piece of fiction... I'm sorry if that's all i could say but it is becaus ei am awstruck.
This was an amazing piece of fiction... I'm sorry if that's all i could say but it is becaus ei am awstruck.
10/19/2015 c20 KAMtheDork
I absolutely ADORE this story! I love the way it switched points of view throughout, as it didn't leave people guessing too much on what people were thinking. The story is unique, which is super refreshing to see! Thank you soooo much for all of your patience, dedication and time that you put into this story, I do very much hope you continue writing! I do recognize the last few lines of dialogue from a certain comic I found a while back, I do like how you incorporated it. To keep this short, I just wanna say that this is definitely one of the best FanFictions I have read, and I did thoroughly enjoy it!
Thanks, KAMtheDork, Certified Dork and FanFiction reader!
I absolutely ADORE this story! I love the way it switched points of view throughout, as it didn't leave people guessing too much on what people were thinking. The story is unique, which is super refreshing to see! Thank you soooo much for all of your patience, dedication and time that you put into this story, I do very much hope you continue writing! I do recognize the last few lines of dialogue from a certain comic I found a while back, I do like how you incorporated it. To keep this short, I just wanna say that this is definitely one of the best FanFictions I have read, and I did thoroughly enjoy it!
Thanks, KAMtheDork, Certified Dork and FanFiction reader!
8/7/2015 c20 ookaminoarashi
Very impressive. An interesting spin on the usual fanfiction that while i have never seen one like it before i wish there were a lot more like it.
Very impressive. An interesting spin on the usual fanfiction that while i have never seen one like it before i wish there were a lot more like it.