
5/13/2007 c5 bluerose24
This is really good so far. I hope that you update this sometime in the future.
This is really good so far. I hope that you update this sometime in the future.
8/12/2006 c1
32swarlock
This iws a very good story. I wrote something similar a few days ago with Michael in mind. Keep up the good work.

This iws a very good story. I wrote something similar a few days ago with Michael in mind. Keep up the good work.
5/1/2006 c5
8platinumvamp
make jack say he loves will kill michael for hurting my poor will and make him happy will truman and jack mcfarland for life love love love

make jack say he loves will kill michael for hurting my poor will and make him happy will truman and jack mcfarland for life love love love
1/26/2006 c5
35skinnyrita
when are you updating this again? please do, i love will/jack, and also joe and larry they are so cute! lol. loved the accidental kiss part they should have that happen again. i know, are will n jack sharing a room at jow n larry's? u can put a lot of sexual tension in there!
please update soon, i really like this fic so far it's a shame you haven't updated for so long.
skinnyrita

when are you updating this again? please do, i love will/jack, and also joe and larry they are so cute! lol. loved the accidental kiss part they should have that happen again. i know, are will n jack sharing a room at jow n larry's? u can put a lot of sexual tension in there!
please update soon, i really like this fic so far it's a shame you haven't updated for so long.
skinnyrita
1/3/2006 c5
1XYP
This was an amazing story, I loved reading it! It was so detailed and one of the few well-written stories i've read on FF. Please finish it, I can't wait to find out what happens! Great Job!

This was an amazing story, I loved reading it! It was so detailed and one of the few well-written stories i've read on FF. Please finish it, I can't wait to find out what happens! Great Job!
12/6/2005 c5 Jaclyn
this is so awesome... write more!1
this is so awesome... write more!1
11/14/2005 c5 Mary
hello!
I really like your story! I like those "accidentall" kisses, when someone tries to kiss the other friendly but the otherone turns their head! You haven't made Will and Jack out of character, thank God, because that's often what authors do. keep up the good work and let that sexual tension between the two of them come!
hello!
I really like your story! I like those "accidentall" kisses, when someone tries to kiss the other friendly but the otherone turns their head! You haven't made Will and Jack out of character, thank God, because that's often what authors do. keep up the good work and let that sexual tension between the two of them come!
11/13/2005 c5
33Captain Oz
Yay! three chapters all at once! We must have all been very good... damn, I wish this was an actual episode so I could see the accidental kiss. Still, lovely. XD

Yay! three chapters all at once! We must have all been very good... damn, I wish this was an actual episode so I could see the accidental kiss. Still, lovely. XD