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6Catty Vancouver
I really enjoyed this, and I would be really interested in seeing where you decided to go with it. I like the idea of someone around the Animorphs discovering what was going on with them (hopefully without them becoming an Animorph themselves, because that has been done a lot). I see that this was posted 6 years ago, so I guess the odds aren't good, but I would still really enjoy reading a continuation of this :)
6Catty VancouverI really enjoyed this, and I would be really interested in seeing where you decided to go with it. I like the idea of someone around the Animorphs discovering what was going on with them (hopefully without them becoming an Animorph themselves, because that has been done a lot). I see that this was posted 6 years ago, so I guess the odds aren't good, but I would still really enjoy reading a continuation of this :)
10/16/2006 c1 4tcganimefan
This is really awesome. Are you going to update?
You did a good job capturing K.A. Applegates' style of writing. If you update this, I'd like to see more.
4tcganimefanThis is really awesome. Are you going to update?
You did a good job capturing K.A. Applegates' style of writing. If you update this, I'd like to see more.
1/30/2006 c1 5The Xylia
Hey, do you remember this story? I was browsing through the archives and found it, and I must say, it looks promising. Please continue. :)
5The XyliaHey, do you remember this story? I was browsing through the archives and found it, and I must say, it looks promising. Please continue. :)
12/11/2005 c1 5angeltread
This is very, very good. I'm waiting for the next chapter - I can feel for Jamie, 'cause I'm a people watcher too.
5angeltreadThis is very, very good. I'm waiting for the next chapter - I can feel for Jamie, 'cause I'm a people watcher too.
10/16/2005 c1 7PrincessKitty-Chan
You wrote it just like K.A. Applegate, herself. Beautiful! I'm so glad I've begun looking at your other works. You have a real knack for sounding just like the original author. I hope you do some original work as well.
This was an interesting perspective. However, by the third mention of "people watcher" I was beginning to grow annoyed. I got it that she was a "people watcher" after the second time. I know you added it for effect, but too much effect leaves less creativity in writing.
Very good. I like this story. I hope this isn't a one-shot fic, but if it is, I love it. If it isn't, I look forward to your next chapter.
7PrincessKitty-ChanYou wrote it just like K.A. Applegate, herself. Beautiful! I'm so glad I've begun looking at your other works. You have a real knack for sounding just like the original author. I hope you do some original work as well.
This was an interesting perspective. However, by the third mention of "people watcher" I was beginning to grow annoyed. I got it that she was a "people watcher" after the second time. I know you added it for effect, but too much effect leaves less creativity in writing.
Very good. I like this story. I hope this isn't a one-shot fic, but if it is, I love it. If it isn't, I look forward to your next chapter.
10/4/2005 c1 7The Old Rycr
Sounds like this is going to be a great story. Haven't read my Animorphs books for years, but i might reread them now. Can't wait for chapter 2!
7The Old RycrSounds like this is going to be a great story. Haven't read my Animorphs books for years, but i might reread them now. Can't wait for chapter 2!
9/29/2005 c1 3squifer
is this a one shot or are you going to continue it? i'd really like to see how it turns out!
3squiferis this a one shot or are you going to continue it? i'd really like to see how it turns out!
9/24/2005 c1 animorph fan
please,please,please write more.Thi is probably the best fan fic i've read.
please,please,please write more.Thi is probably the best fan fic i've read.
8/3/2005 c1 17Sinister Shadow
This is really an excellent story. It's not the type of story I usually read, but still it kept my attention and got me wondering what would happen next.
Great job! 10/10
Please update soon!
Sinister Shadow
17Sinister ShadowThis is really an excellent story. It's not the type of story I usually read, but still it kept my attention and got me wondering what would happen next.
Great job! 10/10
Please update soon!
Sinister Shadow
7/21/2005 c1 Brittany
you should really comtinue this one-it's another like i can't tell if your KAA or not.
you should really comtinue this one-it's another like i can't tell if your KAA or not.
7/18/2005 c1 animorph19
wow, this is good stuff! please write more. it's interesting to know how other people felt about the animorphs.
wow, this is good stuff! please write more. it's interesting to know how other people felt about the animorphs.