for Shadows Of The Past6/28/2006 c4 
7sportschickVLVR
Uh oh! Somebody's been caught by the devil himself! I was wondering when you'd have Vegeta encounter Frieza. Sorry it took so long! I finally caught a glimpse of the Story Alert in my folder of 180 alerts. -_- I have to get rid of them by the end of the summer. O.O 180 stories and chapters to read. GAH.
Well getting back to the story, pretty awesome chapter! Only a couple minor mistakes, but totally flowing and understandable. You get better each time I read you! ^_^ Well I can't wait to see the next chapter. I can hear the narrator in my head now. "Will Vegeta ever see Violet again? Is Violet really still alive? WILL VEGETA BE ALIVE FOR LONG! Find out... on the next episode of SHADOWS OF THE PAST!" muahahah.
Man I haven't talked to you in forever! My computer in my room totally doesn't work. -_- Curse worms and viruses. It won't even flipping turn on so I can't even use Norton. CURSES. So now I am confined to the restrictions of my fathers computer, which he has forbidden the downloading of AIM, Yahoo, or any other Instant Messaging system. We should get an e-mail system up. I haven't talked to Dark in a while, either. I miss you guys! (*sniff*) Well this has probably been the most off topic review of your life, so I shall end it now. Again, awesome chapter! Until your next installment!
~Ms. Chicky~
7sportschickVLVRUh oh! Somebody's been caught by the devil himself! I was wondering when you'd have Vegeta encounter Frieza. Sorry it took so long! I finally caught a glimpse of the Story Alert in my folder of 180 alerts. -_- I have to get rid of them by the end of the summer. O.O 180 stories and chapters to read. GAH.
Well getting back to the story, pretty awesome chapter! Only a couple minor mistakes, but totally flowing and understandable. You get better each time I read you! ^_^ Well I can't wait to see the next chapter. I can hear the narrator in my head now. "Will Vegeta ever see Violet again? Is Violet really still alive? WILL VEGETA BE ALIVE FOR LONG! Find out... on the next episode of SHADOWS OF THE PAST!" muahahah.
Man I haven't talked to you in forever! My computer in my room totally doesn't work. -_- Curse worms and viruses. It won't even flipping turn on so I can't even use Norton. CURSES. So now I am confined to the restrictions of my fathers computer, which he has forbidden the downloading of AIM, Yahoo, or any other Instant Messaging system. We should get an e-mail system up. I haven't talked to Dark in a while, either. I miss you guys! (*sniff*) Well this has probably been the most off topic review of your life, so I shall end it now. Again, awesome chapter! Until your next installment!
~Ms. Chicky~
5/24/2006 c4 14Scorpion29
I liked it, very angsty, though there were some grammer and punctuation problems. Overall I liked it, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! I heart you!
14Scorpion29I liked it, very angsty, though there were some grammer and punctuation problems. Overall I liked it, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! I heart you!
5/13/2006 c4 7Star0307
Two weeks later... (I'm a bad person _ _)
Hiya! This chapter was very impressive and dark. ;_; Poor Velvet! I hope she turns out to be okay! And, of course, I hate Frieza with all my heart. He must've been the worst bad guy ever. EVER.
And I did notice the chapter titles, surprisingly. I'd like it a lot if you did a song fic for the next chapter, but that's just me. Update soon!
7Star0307Two weeks later... (I'm a bad person _ _)
Hiya! This chapter was very impressive and dark. ;_; Poor Velvet! I hope she turns out to be okay! And, of course, I hate Frieza with all my heart. He must've been the worst bad guy ever. EVER.
And I did notice the chapter titles, surprisingly. I'd like it a lot if you did a song fic for the next chapter, but that's just me. Update soon!
5/2/2006 c3 severussweetie
Dude! Raccly girl, what is up with FFN again? They are about to drive me crazy! Well I was bored and decided to read your story again! It was worth the second go around and I just figured I would tell ya that! Can't wait to update my story and I can't wait for you to update yours! DAMN YOU FFN!
Dude! Raccly girl, what is up with FFN again? They are about to drive me crazy! Well I was bored and decided to read your story again! It was worth the second go around and I just figured I would tell ya that! Can't wait to update my story and I can't wait for you to update yours! DAMN YOU FFN!
5/1/2006 c4 3DarkestDestiny06
Why, what a marvelous chapter, my furry little friend. ;-p And I expect more from you,... or else... *Laughs evily* Now, I shall return to my eyeball soup...
3DarkestDestiny06Why, what a marvelous chapter, my furry little friend. ;-p And I expect more from you,... or else... *Laughs evily* Now, I shall return to my eyeball soup...
5/1/2006 c4 severussweetie
And you doubted yourself? Are you mad? I thought that this was a wonderful chapter and story! IT IS AMAZING AND I AM HOOKED! Never be hard on yourself again. You have a marvolus talent and you need to update soon so I cn get my fix!
And you doubted yourself? Are you mad? I thought that this was a wonderful chapter and story! IT IS AMAZING AND I AM HOOKED! Never be hard on yourself again. You have a marvolus talent and you need to update soon so I cn get my fix!
2/25/2006 c1 arbiter
wort wort? O.o i don't get it...who is velvet? and vegeta? IM SO CONFUSED! well i did like it! it was cool and intersting! i didn't get the point but its still good enough! P.S i love you axy! P.s.s i like waflles! P.s.s.s: i just got hungry and ate a mouse! ^(T.T)^
wort wort? O.o i don't get it...who is velvet? and vegeta? IM SO CONFUSED! well i did like it! it was cool and intersting! i didn't get the point but its still good enough! P.S i love you axy! P.s.s i like waflles! P.s.s.s: i just got hungry and ate a mouse! ^(T.T)^
1/24/2006 c1 dragon
i love it edna can you give me the link to the others?
i love it edna can you give me the link to the others?
1/4/2006 c1 3wowhatahotgurl
OMG! this story is so cool! i love it! i can't wait till ur next story. haha, and of COURSE Vegeta will always take Bulma in the end. DUH! lol GREAT fic! i adored it
~*Xtina*~
3wowhatahotgurlOMG! this story is so cool! i love it! i can't wait till ur next story. haha, and of COURSE Vegeta will always take Bulma in the end. DUH! lol GREAT fic! i adored it
~*Xtina*~
12/24/2005 c3 7sportschickVLVR
Dudette, it is amazing how much better you've gotten since I first met you. ^_^ It's so awesome that you took my suggestion of a 'trip' and really ran home with it! There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing you can't fix later. Style-wise, it was right on the money! (tear) My friend is growin' up! (wails) Well its okay. That means you'll just keep gettin' better and better! Keep writing girl. And keep drawing! You've got nothing to lose! Well, until next time.
7sportschickVLVRDudette, it is amazing how much better you've gotten since I first met you. ^_^ It's so awesome that you took my suggestion of a 'trip' and really ran home with it! There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing you can't fix later. Style-wise, it was right on the money! (tear) My friend is growin' up! (wails) Well its okay. That means you'll just keep gettin' better and better! Keep writing girl. And keep drawing! You've got nothing to lose! Well, until next time.
12/24/2005 c3 J.S
I don't care how you do the story, as long as it's interesting. Please keep up the good work... What's wrong with people writing an entire story, and then uploading it? Then we wouldn't have to wait so long for updates! Soz to hear you've had a rough time.
I don't care how you do the story, as long as it's interesting. Please keep up the good work... What's wrong with people writing an entire story, and then uploading it? Then we wouldn't have to wait so long for updates! Soz to hear you've had a rough time.
12/24/2005 c2 J.S
ADD? What's that? You mean ADHD, or something similar? And since I'm an author too, trust me, the best typing is usually done 'off the top of your head'. Free rein! Aww, they're getting all gooey on eachother... LOL! Just so you know, fast updaters are always good, and so are cliffhangers. However, if you plan to update slowly, DON'T YOU DARE PUT CLIFFHANGERS IN THE ENDINDS OF EACH CHAPTER! LOL, soz, it's just that it's SO VERY painful.
ADD? What's that? You mean ADHD, or something similar? And since I'm an author too, trust me, the best typing is usually done 'off the top of your head'. Free rein! Aww, they're getting all gooey on eachother... LOL! Just so you know, fast updaters are always good, and so are cliffhangers. However, if you plan to update slowly, DON'T YOU DARE PUT CLIFFHANGERS IN THE ENDINDS OF EACH CHAPTER! LOL, soz, it's just that it's SO VERY painful.
12/24/2005 c1 J.S
First of all, I must applaud you for not performing the utterly stupid move of disabling anonymous reviewers. NOBODY should ever do that, and those that do shouldn't whinge about lack of reviewers. You, however, are fully entitled to, if you so wish. I totally fell in love with 'Velvet'. I've always loved the female Saiyan fics, because the series could have done with at least one powerful chick.. But of all the fics I've read, your 'female saiyan' name has to be the best. Maybe, for once, unless it interferes with your plans too much, could Velvet (love that name) be a tough chick? Not insanely blandly indifferent, but you know, a very 'Saiyan' chick. Tough and fearless, strong and intelligent, a fighter and a bit heartless... sigh
First of all, I must applaud you for not performing the utterly stupid move of disabling anonymous reviewers. NOBODY should ever do that, and those that do shouldn't whinge about lack of reviewers. You, however, are fully entitled to, if you so wish. I totally fell in love with 'Velvet'. I've always loved the female Saiyan fics, because the series could have done with at least one powerful chick.. But of all the fics I've read, your 'female saiyan' name has to be the best. Maybe, for once, unless it interferes with your plans too much, could Velvet (love that name) be a tough chick? Not insanely blandly indifferent, but you know, a very 'Saiyan' chick. Tough and fearless, strong and intelligent, a fighter and a bit heartless... sigh