
6/5/2006 c2 Rebecca
I really like it... But I don't like they way you put her like an Scandinavian... I'm one and I'm not blond and I do not have blue eyes... as a lot of pepol here... But you saved it :)
Everything else is good. I like the story! :)
I really like it... But I don't like they way you put her like an Scandinavian... I'm one and I'm not blond and I do not have blue eyes... as a lot of pepol here... But you saved it :)
Everything else is good. I like the story! :)
2/14/2006 c9 LauraBreesamuels
I can't believe how well you write! This is a great story! You seem to write the characters mingling with each other so smoothly, there are no ackward dialogue. Okay I've said it before but I love your story!
I can't believe how well you write! This is a great story! You seem to write the characters mingling with each other so smoothly, there are no ackward dialogue. Okay I've said it before but I love your story!
2/14/2006 c8 LauraBreesamuels
Awe that was an awesome chapter! That last couple of lines made me almost cry ;( Kirsten obviously doesn't dislike her like my previous thoughts! So good!
Awe that was an awesome chapter! That last couple of lines made me almost cry ;( Kirsten obviously doesn't dislike her like my previous thoughts! So good!
2/14/2006 c6 LauraBreesamuels
Hey! I haven't been able to review for a while because I haven't really had the time I did before (I know excuses, excuses) But I have to say great story! I just love it.
This chapter was interesting. Does Kirsten really like her? I get the feeling she doesn't too much, I mean I would understand how she wouldn't, but I really like where you are going with this... now onto the next chapter. :)
Hey! I haven't been able to review for a while because I haven't really had the time I did before (I know excuses, excuses) But I have to say great story! I just love it.
This chapter was interesting. Does Kirsten really like her? I get the feeling she doesn't too much, I mean I would understand how she wouldn't, but I really like where you are going with this... now onto the next chapter. :)
9/5/2005 c8 She Loves Shoes
hello from australia!
i finally found some time to pop on to read and review my favourite fic :)
i loved the new chapter, especially the summer/grace bonding.
cant wait for more!
xx sunny
hello from australia!
i finally found some time to pop on to read and review my favourite fic :)
i loved the new chapter, especially the summer/grace bonding.
cant wait for more!
xx sunny
8/30/2005 c9 aynonomous
amazing...keep going
amazing...keep going
8/24/2005 c9
44Ansy Pansy aka Panz
Aw this was good. But btw it posted itself twice in the chapter lol!

Aw this was good. But btw it posted itself twice in the chapter lol!
8/23/2005 c9 kursk
This fic is great, I just discovered it, and I loved it. I just hope that ryan will be a larger part soon, and that summer and jim will do it soon.
Update ASAP.
This fic is great, I just discovered it, and I loved it. I just hope that ryan will be a larger part soon, and that summer and jim will do it soon.
Update ASAP.
8/23/2005 c9
12I-Believe-In-The-Butterflies
Great chapter...but you kind of doubled it at the end. Not a big deal though.
I liked how Summer and Grace are getting along and that you didn't make Grace someone who slept with a lot of guys.
Great chapter...can't wait for Ryan!
update soon!
You ROck! -J

Great chapter...but you kind of doubled it at the end. Not a big deal though.
I liked how Summer and Grace are getting along and that you didn't make Grace someone who slept with a lot of guys.
Great chapter...can't wait for Ryan!
update soon!
You ROck! -J
8/23/2005 c9
1Sea4Shoes
Great chapter! I'm glad Summer and Grace are becoming friends. Summer's my fave female on the show, lol. I love when she calls Seth nicknames like "assface" and when she has her "rage blackouts".
Haha I'm weird. Anyway, update soon!

Great chapter! I'm glad Summer and Grace are becoming friends. Summer's my fave female on the show, lol. I love when she calls Seth nicknames like "assface" and when she has her "rage blackouts".
Haha I'm weird. Anyway, update soon!
8/23/2005 c6 Ansy Pansy aka Panz
You write such great observations of Newport and the life there. They're so comic too. Love it!
You write such great observations of Newport and the life there. They're so comic too. Love it!