for If Love Sets You Free12/21/2005 c1 genesis3rdyr
sobrang makatotohahan nito.basketball player pa kla mo lalaking lalaki pero bisexual pla hahaha.gling magsulat ni maggie hanga ko malawak ang imagination.fiction ang mga sinusulat ibang klase!astig!
sobrang makatotohahan nito.basketball player pa kla mo lalaking lalaki pero bisexual pla hahaha.gling magsulat ni maggie hanga ko malawak ang imagination.fiction ang mga sinusulat ibang klase!astig!
11/15/2005 c1 bohemiangirl
very much censored to young people who can enter this site without any parental notice.. and the flashbacks! i can imagine it: the place, Rukawa and Mitsui.. and the theme... if love sets you free.. in other words, it is a great story.. the very idea of it is amazing.. where did you get the idea for your story? it is really awesome.. i can never invent a story so unique as yours.. i never heard of a story wherein two guys fall in love beacuse of a stupid bet, the other is a psychic who is having trouble dealing with the past and the hurt he had gone through then and two bisexuals finding each other when they need each other desperately! and you can feel the hard time Mitsui was going through.. you can sense the deep longing for their love to rekindle.. you can see through their emotions, on what they really feel, on what they are going through.. few beginning writers can write this well.. and believe it or not, darling, you are one of them! kudos to you!
very much censored to young people who can enter this site without any parental notice.. and the flashbacks! i can imagine it: the place, Rukawa and Mitsui.. and the theme... if love sets you free.. in other words, it is a great story.. the very idea of it is amazing.. where did you get the idea for your story? it is really awesome.. i can never invent a story so unique as yours.. i never heard of a story wherein two guys fall in love beacuse of a stupid bet, the other is a psychic who is having trouble dealing with the past and the hurt he had gone through then and two bisexuals finding each other when they need each other desperately! and you can feel the hard time Mitsui was going through.. you can sense the deep longing for their love to rekindle.. you can see through their emotions, on what they really feel, on what they are going through.. few beginning writers can write this well.. and believe it or not, darling, you are one of them! kudos to you!
8/18/2005 c1 
40mayfaire
oh heavy drama, never read one for mitru for quite some time.the fic was okay!didnt look like your first one!and yay for mitru goodies!i love them!they rock and you should write more okay!
40mayfaireoh heavy drama, never read one for mitru for quite some time.the fic was okay!didnt look like your first one!and yay for mitru goodies!i love them!they rock and you should write more okay!
7/26/2005 c1 75Night Strider
'I was straight back then, or so I thought'
That was funny. hahaha. It's good that it started off with confusion and not with the usual straightforward declaration of I-am-gay.
Anyway, well-written. Beautifully and simply expressed, if I may say so. I would, however, point out the inconsistency of your tenses. Meaning to say, they should have all been in the past form since the whole thing is recounted in a flashback, right? But don't mind me too much.
All in all, it was very sweet and sad. Not to mention seriously dramatic. I only wish that time was longer for both of them and that things were put in a more subtle way. I also loved the fact that the guilt is on Mitsui, which makes it clear that it couldn't have been a one sided love affair. Frankly, the sad ending only makes me appreciate it all the more.
I also want to thank you for writing a Mit-Ru fic because that's my favorite. I haven't been reading fics in this category for quite awhile since MitRu fics are fairly rare nowadays, so again thank you.
Lastly, anyone can be yaoi writer, really, so I encourage you to write more.
75Night Strider'I was straight back then, or so I thought'
That was funny. hahaha. It's good that it started off with confusion and not with the usual straightforward declaration of I-am-gay.
Anyway, well-written. Beautifully and simply expressed, if I may say so. I would, however, point out the inconsistency of your tenses. Meaning to say, they should have all been in the past form since the whole thing is recounted in a flashback, right? But don't mind me too much.
All in all, it was very sweet and sad. Not to mention seriously dramatic. I only wish that time was longer for both of them and that things were put in a more subtle way. I also loved the fact that the guilt is on Mitsui, which makes it clear that it couldn't have been a one sided love affair. Frankly, the sad ending only makes me appreciate it all the more.
I also want to thank you for writing a Mit-Ru fic because that's my favorite. I haven't been reading fics in this category for quite awhile since MitRu fics are fairly rare nowadays, so again thank you.
Lastly, anyone can be yaoi writer, really, so I encourage you to write more.
7/24/2005 c1 rei
bakit mo naman pinag partner sina rukawa at mitsui?ginawa mo pang BAKLA si mitsui!ang panget tignan!dating gang leder tapos bakla!pero ok lang!cute naman eh!
bakit mo naman pinag partner sina rukawa at mitsui?ginawa mo pang BAKLA si mitsui!ang panget tignan!dating gang leder tapos bakla!pero ok lang!cute naman eh!