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7/23/2007 c6 jacksparrowsluvergrl
Awsome! WRITE MORE!
7/18/2006 c1 3misty4ever
hey, good job!

if you need more advice, or anything else, you know how to contact me.
3/28/2006 c6 i love athrun
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
1/12/2006 c6 Lucas 316
Hi. Ya it's me. Awesome chappie. I like it. It's getting really good. keep up the good work!
1/3/2006 c6 1krystalmaze
o evil rai! *looks around shoves rai in closet, catches sight of author*

oh hi great story, i was nearly squealing with happiness when i saw the update

it was great ^_^

loved it hope ya update soon.
1/1/2006 c6 43Kosmic
Very nice work keep it up.
12/2/2005 c4 7Lucky-Racer
Five day weekend? You lucky duck. :P We'd never get that here in Kentucky.

XD

Update soon!
12/2/2005 c3 Lucky-Racer
Omi's sister? :D Does she have yellow skin? Hehehe. Also, sorry if I am annoying you with the corrections; I'm not trying to be bossy. :P

^_^

Update soon!
11/24/2005 c5 5StephanieFan
happy thanksgiving to you too! and im sorry your great uncle died
10/30/2005 c4 Lucas 316
(Smiles) yey. You updated. That was great! I'm excited to read more. :) :) :)
10/29/2005 c4 StephanieFan
to be honest im really not sure the exact definetion. all i know is that its sorta like a character you made up. good thing melody's a ninja cause they dont act perky
10/29/2005 c4 1krystalmaze
i think that she is somewhat unemotional

anyways good chappie great description of Melody
10/28/2005 c3 5StephanieFan
no prob! the important thing is to make it good and make sure it makes sense. i never make sense when i talk so i'll shut up...by the way! surprising when master fung said thats omi's sister melody. at last! an oc whos a girl and she aint girly!
10/28/2005 c3 1krystalmaze
o so cool luv that cliffhanger

Please don't capitallize my name it is k not K
10/9/2005 c2 krystalmaze
very good you must update

i want to know more about this oh so perfect ninja
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