
7/18/2006 c1
3misty4ever
hey, good job!
if you need more advice, or anything else, you know how to contact me.

hey, good job!
if you need more advice, or anything else, you know how to contact me.
1/12/2006 c6 Lucas 316
Hi. Ya it's me. Awesome chappie. I like it. It's getting really good. keep up the good work!
Hi. Ya it's me. Awesome chappie. I like it. It's getting really good. keep up the good work!
1/3/2006 c6
1krystalmaze
o evil rai! *looks around shoves rai in closet, catches sight of author*
oh hi great story, i was nearly squealing with happiness when i saw the update
it was great ^_^
loved it hope ya update soon.

o evil rai! *looks around shoves rai in closet, catches sight of author*
oh hi great story, i was nearly squealing with happiness when i saw the update
it was great ^_^
loved it hope ya update soon.
12/2/2005 c4
7Lucky-Racer
Five day weekend? You lucky duck. :P We'd never get that here in Kentucky.
XD
Update soon!

Five day weekend? You lucky duck. :P We'd never get that here in Kentucky.
XD
Update soon!
12/2/2005 c3 Lucky-Racer
Omi's sister? :D Does she have yellow skin? Hehehe. Also, sorry if I am annoying you with the corrections; I'm not trying to be bossy. :P
^_^
Update soon!
Omi's sister? :D Does she have yellow skin? Hehehe. Also, sorry if I am annoying you with the corrections; I'm not trying to be bossy. :P
^_^
Update soon!
10/30/2005 c4 Lucas 316
(Smiles) yey. You updated. That was great! I'm excited to read more. :) :) :)
(Smiles) yey. You updated. That was great! I'm excited to read more. :) :) :)
10/29/2005 c4 StephanieFan
to be honest im really not sure the exact definetion. all i know is that its sorta like a character you made up. good thing melody's a ninja cause they dont act perky
to be honest im really not sure the exact definetion. all i know is that its sorta like a character you made up. good thing melody's a ninja cause they dont act perky
10/29/2005 c4
1krystalmaze
i think that she is somewhat unemotional
anyways good chappie great description of Melody

i think that she is somewhat unemotional
anyways good chappie great description of Melody
10/28/2005 c3
5StephanieFan
no prob! the important thing is to make it good and make sure it makes sense. i never make sense when i talk so i'll shut up...by the way! surprising when master fung said thats omi's sister melody. at last! an oc whos a girl and she aint girly!

no prob! the important thing is to make it good and make sure it makes sense. i never make sense when i talk so i'll shut up...by the way! surprising when master fung said thats omi's sister melody. at last! an oc whos a girl and she aint girly!
10/28/2005 c3
1krystalmaze
o so cool luv that cliffhanger
Please don't capitallize my name it is k not K

o so cool luv that cliffhanger
Please don't capitallize my name it is k not K
10/9/2005 c2 krystalmaze
very good you must update
i want to know more about this oh so perfect ninja
very good you must update
i want to know more about this oh so perfect ninja