for Restraining To Say Sit!4/16/2021 c1 
1JewelKat16
way too many notes, we don't need to know every single comment from the beta, and nobody cares that you're too lazy to explain where the clothes came from. it's unimportant to the story, and you mentioning it takes people out of the story.
1JewelKat16way too many notes, we don't need to know every single comment from the beta, and nobody cares that you're too lazy to explain where the clothes came from. it's unimportant to the story, and you mentioning it takes people out of the story.
7/9/2006 c17 lazycat
Hi, it's me. I did finally read the story like I told you I would. It was a cute ending, I am always amused by Inuyasha's reaction to Kouga. Do you enjoy the sense of accomplishment that comes from finishing a story? I hope you do. Talk to you later.
Hi, it's me. I did finally read the story like I told you I would. It was a cute ending, I am always amused by Inuyasha's reaction to Kouga. Do you enjoy the sense of accomplishment that comes from finishing a story? I hope you do. Talk to you later.
6/28/2006 c17 MM
LOL nope they wont, good story^-^ but i think u should have kept it a comedy and not turn it into a battel fanfic but ohwell^^ thax 4 entertaining me^o^
~nya~
InuKag 4 EVA!^O^ XD LOL
JK NOT! *ps* i like the fact that kikyou was nice and helped kagome out^^*
LOL nope they wont, good story^-^ but i think u should have kept it a comedy and not turn it into a battel fanfic but ohwell^^ thax 4 entertaining me^o^
~nya~
InuKag 4 EVA!^O^ XD LOL
JK NOT! *ps* i like the fact that kikyou was nice and helped kagome out^^*
6/28/2006 c12 MM
YEAY!^0^
(hes a half doggy deamon again^0^)
YEAY!^0^
(hes a half doggy deamon again^0^)
6/27/2006 c9 mm
ok iv always wondered if he can b sat as a human^^
and there was something els but me no remember='(
ohwell and whydjya make it so long and dramatic it ruins*sp*
the humor=(
ok iv always wondered if he can b sat as a human^^
and there was something els but me no remember='(
ohwell and whydjya make it so long and dramatic it ruins*sp*
the humor=(
6/27/2006 c8 mini masha
SO AM I!^O^ uh a deamon in disguise i meen^^ but im a cat deamon
^.^ ~nya~! uh who said im a deamon im no deamon uh hehe^^;
(runs away screaming) AH!
THE CATS DEAMON LIKE SO OUT OF THE BAG!O
SO AM I!^O^ uh a deamon in disguise i meen^^ but im a cat deamon
^.^ ~nya~! uh who said im a deamon im no deamon uh hehe^^;
(runs away screaming) AH!
THE CATS DEAMON LIKE SO OUT OF THE BAG!O
6/27/2006 c7 mini masha
ok i was gunna tell u what kag should have wished 4 (b4 i read it)
but urs is so much BETTER!^O^
no on w/ the story oh wit isnt that ur line^^; *die KIKYOU did i say that! ok so i did^^* ~nya~^O^
ok i was gunna tell u what kag should have wished 4 (b4 i read it)
but urs is so much BETTER!^O^
no on w/ the story oh wit isnt that ur line^^; *die KIKYOU did i say that! ok so i did^^* ~nya~^O^
6/15/2006 c16 Kim
In chapter 16, you say that miroku cannot use his wind tunnel because of all the beasts around him, but in a previous chapter, you say he no longer HAS his wind tunnel!
In chapter 16, you say that miroku cannot use his wind tunnel because of all the beasts around him, but in a previous chapter, you say he no longer HAS his wind tunnel!
3/6/2006 c7 4Vampiress Yugure
(All Kikyo haters start asking why (beta: WHY!) ...uh cause... Starts running as they chase me... okay continuing with the story!)
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(chaseing you) WHY! KILL KINY-HOE~! WHY!
4Vampiress Yugure(All Kikyo haters start asking why (beta: WHY!) ...uh cause... Starts running as they chase me... okay continuing with the story!)
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(chaseing you) WHY! KILL KINY-HOE~! WHY!
1/29/2006 c16 lazycat
I like it. I love "Shippo go BOOM!", it makes me smile. And brings back memories of convention but anyway, do you use Word to type these chapters? Because you need to use SPELLCHECK. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, it is clever and Fluffy(love fluff!Like the fluff of Sesshy's tail!, I just have this overwhelming urge to correct a few spelling errors. Here goes: Ch. 14:aloud is out loud, you want to use allowed, as in permission granted. That's in the note. Ch.15: It is not jewl, but jewel, precious has a c and an i, and when Owsumi is asking about the jewel at the begining of the chapter, you need a question mark after the "is it not", like "not?" I believe you mean to use delicious, cocky instead of cokey(don't think it's a word), scowled instead of sowled, and flouting is showing off, and that could be what you wanted to say, but for Owsumi's entrance I think you meant to say floated in, and desire not disire. Ch.16:Do not use tered(another nonexistent word) but torn(describing Sango) and the phrase reads better if you use "limping badly",and when Miroku is described if you say he has cuts, the reader is less likely to think he just ripped his robes. By the by, you are evil! That was a well done Cliff-hanger, and I will pressure you to write me the next chapter. Soon!
I like it. I love "Shippo go BOOM!", it makes me smile. And brings back memories of convention but anyway, do you use Word to type these chapters? Because you need to use SPELLCHECK. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, it is clever and Fluffy(love fluff!Like the fluff of Sesshy's tail!, I just have this overwhelming urge to correct a few spelling errors. Here goes: Ch. 14:aloud is out loud, you want to use allowed, as in permission granted. That's in the note. Ch.15: It is not jewl, but jewel, precious has a c and an i, and when Owsumi is asking about the jewel at the begining of the chapter, you need a question mark after the "is it not", like "not?" I believe you mean to use delicious, cocky instead of cokey(don't think it's a word), scowled instead of sowled, and flouting is showing off, and that could be what you wanted to say, but for Owsumi's entrance I think you meant to say floated in, and desire not disire. Ch.16:Do not use tered(another nonexistent word) but torn(describing Sango) and the phrase reads better if you use "limping badly",and when Miroku is described if you say he has cuts, the reader is less likely to think he just ripped his robes. By the by, you are evil! That was a well done Cliff-hanger, and I will pressure you to write me the next chapter. Soon!
11/18/2005 c15 ThisisGood
Hey good and creepy and sweet and I just can't wait for more.
Evil cliffie, why must you put in an evil cliffie. Tortureous.
More SOON PLEASE!
Hey good and creepy and sweet and I just can't wait for more.
Evil cliffie, why must you put in an evil cliffie. Tortureous.
More SOON PLEASE!