for Paper Moon8/28/2011 c8 MJJ
I love how I can actually see your writing style improve and mature from the first chapter! Fantastic idea! I love how psychic you are naming the kid Albus :L I was chanting Slap Him! Slap Him! And tonks DID and it made me happy :p
I love how I can actually see your writing style improve and mature from the first chapter! Fantastic idea! I love how psychic you are naming the kid Albus :L I was chanting Slap Him! Slap Him! And tonks DID and it made me happy :p
12/27/2007 c8 
9BlueSkyMornings
OMG! you're NOT going to Ieave it at this are you? I mean I know it's been on HoId for two dang years, but to Ieave it there.. I mean 7 years is a whiIe... maybe I shouId do one Iike this... maki it 7 years... but put a kid... I have something kind of Iike that... I wonder what's going to happen next? is he going to hunt her down? wi she break it off with worthIess?
9BlueSkyMorningsOMG! you're NOT going to Ieave it at this are you? I mean I know it's been on HoId for two dang years, but to Ieave it there.. I mean 7 years is a whiIe... maybe I shouId do one Iike this... maki it 7 years... but put a kid... I have something kind of Iike that... I wonder what's going to happen next? is he going to hunt her down? wi she break it off with worthIess?
12/27/2007 c3 BlueSkyMornings
Iet me just say, if he had never EVER written me (I'm pretending I'm Tonks btw) and he Iived in IONDON AII THAT TIME! ... weII, when I saw him again I wouId start YeIng at him Iike... "You were in Iondon AII THIS TIME AND YOU NEVER WROTE ME!" Tonks yeIIed, tears in her eyes, an angry expression set on her face. "Why stopped you? Not ONCE! in SEVEN YEARS have you come to visit, not once have you even said Hi. You couId have just sent a piece of Paper. Hi! just say that. But not ONE WORD. WHy?"
but that's just me, so I'm interested to read the rest and see what she does! good job by the way! I wonder what's going to happen when she sees him!
Iet me just say, if he had never EVER written me (I'm pretending I'm Tonks btw) and he Iived in IONDON AII THAT TIME! ... weII, when I saw him again I wouId start YeIng at him Iike... "You were in Iondon AII THIS TIME AND YOU NEVER WROTE ME!" Tonks yeIIed, tears in her eyes, an angry expression set on her face. "Why stopped you? Not ONCE! in SEVEN YEARS have you come to visit, not once have you even said Hi. You couId have just sent a piece of Paper. Hi! just say that. But not ONE WORD. WHy?"
but that's just me, so I'm interested to read the rest and see what she does! good job by the way! I wonder what's going to happen when she sees him!
2/15/2006 c8 Faith
THIS IS WONDERFUL! I love Lauren! He's so cool! *makes an 'I love Lauren' shirt and proudly displays it for the world!*
And well as for the Tonks and Lupin thing... ha ha ha that is defiantly NOT what I would have suspected! ^^
Write more. I command you!
FAITH
THIS IS WONDERFUL! I love Lauren! He's so cool! *makes an 'I love Lauren' shirt and proudly displays it for the world!*
And well as for the Tonks and Lupin thing... ha ha ha that is defiantly NOT what I would have suspected! ^^
Write more. I command you!
FAITH
11/21/2005 c8 37Beagairbheag
I lurve your story! Not like, not love but Lurve!
Hoping that the writers block and anything else that may be keeping you from writing more chapters in this story goes away quickly, very very quickly.
NaturallyInsane
also known as Mhairi
37BeagairbheagI lurve your story! Not like, not love but Lurve!
Hoping that the writers block and anything else that may be keeping you from writing more chapters in this story goes away quickly, very very quickly.
NaturallyInsane
also known as Mhairi
11/12/2005 c8 2grindylow07
So... I really like this story, even though I'm not the best reviewer ever, since I kind of forget about fanfiction for awhile sometimes, but I'm really hoping your writer's block may go away, because this is a really good story, and I really want to know what happens, and, yeah.
2grindylow07So... I really like this story, even though I'm not the best reviewer ever, since I kind of forget about fanfiction for awhile sometimes, but I'm really hoping your writer's block may go away, because this is a really good story, and I really want to know what happens, and, yeah.
10/28/2005 c8 bella1305pickles
wow. so what happens? you can't just leave off like that and not update. please update soon. i really want to know what happens.
wow. so what happens? you can't just leave off like that and not update. please update soon. i really want to know what happens.
10/14/2005 c7 6MarilynJean
please, please, please continue with this story! i am sorry to bug you like this but this story was my absolute favourite and now you've abandoned it! please finish it for me! it is too great a story to leave undone! this is sucha great story, plesae write more! even if you finish it up in a few chapters, id really appreciate it! please , do it for me and all of your other loyal readers!
6MarilynJeanplease, please, please continue with this story! i am sorry to bug you like this but this story was my absolute favourite and now you've abandoned it! please finish it for me! it is too great a story to leave undone! this is sucha great story, plesae write more! even if you finish it up in a few chapters, id really appreciate it! please , do it for me and all of your other loyal readers!
9/8/2005 c8 c. sherwood
aww...but sugar highs are excellent when you want to write fluff! Please, please, please tell me this is going to work out...
I do think he deserved that slap.^_^
I could have SWORN that I put this story on alert, and yet, 2 CHAPTERS. I've been so uninformed and am very sad.
Hug for an update!
-Charmed
aww...but sugar highs are excellent when you want to write fluff! Please, please, please tell me this is going to work out...
I do think he deserved that slap.^_^
I could have SWORN that I put this story on alert, and yet, 2 CHAPTERS. I've been so uninformed and am very sad.
Hug for an update!
-Charmed
9/4/2005 c8 3AStarGazingGirl
Wow, I just started reading this tonight, and I can't get enough of it! I cannot wait for more. Keep up the good work!
3AStarGazingGirlWow, I just started reading this tonight, and I can't get enough of it! I cannot wait for more. Keep up the good work!
9/4/2005 c8 6MarilynJean
aw i really liked this chapter! ooh, I can't wait for the next, this is such a good story...does that mean that mr Roberts is a werewolf too?...interesting...well if it does than thats interesting! i guess i shall have to wait just like everyone who is not you and read the next chapter! i really liked the way the last half of the chapter seems to build up to something-like roberts finding a cure...that would be great. i also like tonks' reaction. how she didnt stay to talk or forgive remus. it was perfect because she couldn't be expected to forgive him instantly when he brokeher heart and then never wrote. it was really well done. excellant job! thank you for another great chapter, I can't wait for the next!
6MarilynJeanaw i really liked this chapter! ooh, I can't wait for the next, this is such a good story...does that mean that mr Roberts is a werewolf too?...interesting...well if it does than thats interesting! i guess i shall have to wait just like everyone who is not you and read the next chapter! i really liked the way the last half of the chapter seems to build up to something-like roberts finding a cure...that would be great. i also like tonks' reaction. how she didnt stay to talk or forgive remus. it was perfect because she couldn't be expected to forgive him instantly when he brokeher heart and then never wrote. it was really well done. excellant job! thank you for another great chapter, I can't wait for the next!
9/4/2005 c8 counting-fingers
you rock my socks too:D. but Yay you updated and um i dont know what else to say but um please update asap hehehe oh and um sorry about your writers block :(
you rock my socks too:D. but Yay you updated and um i dont know what else to say but um please update asap hehehe oh and um sorry about your writers block :(