for Unlikely1/29/2009 c1 
20starlit skyes
oh! This is cute! I WANT THAT!
Really. You've got the perfect balance of D/G. The snarky replies, the sarcasm. All perfect. If I weren't D/G lover, I'd be one now.
The kisses, or, maybe just the last one, was a bit hard to believe. But still, it was all adorable. I really loved it.
Great job!
20starlit skyesoh! This is cute! I WANT THAT!
Really. You've got the perfect balance of D/G. The snarky replies, the sarcasm. All perfect. If I weren't D/G lover, I'd be one now.
The kisses, or, maybe just the last one, was a bit hard to believe. But still, it was all adorable. I really loved it.
Great job!
11/5/2006 c1 8capableoflove
Good story. You're writing is very good technically which is such a relief to read, expecially on I liked the plot line and how you avoided having them fall in love the first time they meet, which is also a refreshing change from a lot of stories in fanfiction. DG stories especially have this problem. Keep writing good stories for us will you?
Devon
8capableofloveGood story. You're writing is very good technically which is such a relief to read, expecially on I liked the plot line and how you avoided having them fall in love the first time they meet, which is also a refreshing change from a lot of stories in fanfiction. DG stories especially have this problem. Keep writing good stories for us will you?
Devon
12/5/2005 c1 3ThisBurningHeart
Oh Gosh I like this! You did it very well! It was very intelligent of you to make the timeline over a longer period, and not make everything happen at once. It makes for a much more believable plot. It was well written!
3ThisBurningHeartOh Gosh I like this! You did it very well! It was very intelligent of you to make the timeline over a longer period, and not make everything happen at once. It makes for a much more believable plot. It was well written!
11/9/2005 c1 4Mae-Gene
Yay!
Love the ending- very cute but not overly sweet and dripping in honey.
I liked how you made them meet again and again eventually over time to get to know each other beter =)
4Mae-GeneYay!
Love the ending- very cute but not overly sweet and dripping in honey.
I liked how you made them meet again and again eventually over time to get to know each other beter =)
11/4/2005 c1 NoName0823493
that was awesome. haha I loved the banter between the two - had me laughing out loud several times. everyone who reviews my stories say that I'm great w/ witty dialouge like that, but you by far surpass me. absolutely loved it.
that was awesome. haha I loved the banter between the two - had me laughing out loud several times. everyone who reviews my stories say that I'm great w/ witty dialouge like that, but you by far surpass me. absolutely loved it.
8/21/2005 c1 11Pussin Boots
Sweet, odd, nice! V. well written and i like how it wasn't rushed and happened over time, not one week and such...
11Pussin BootsSweet, odd, nice! V. well written and i like how it wasn't rushed and happened over time, not one week and such...
8/1/2005 c1 remembrances
(too lazy to sign in) Very good lol. I like crazy ;)
(too lazy to sign in) Very good lol. I like crazy ;)
7/29/2005 c1 2dreamy-crazygirl
Aw, such cuteness. I just loved this fic, can I say cute again. Well please write some more.
2dreamy-crazygirlAw, such cuteness. I just loved this fic, can I say cute again. Well please write some more.