2/9/2018 c1 Emslionpride
This is really nice. I really like the part where Splinter banishes the nightmare demons. It is so cute.
This is really nice. I really like the part where Splinter banishes the nightmare demons. It is so cute.
11/26/2015 c1 56Natalie Ryan
Sweet. Raph and Leo moments are priceless and perfect. Two brothers that are very different, but love each other unconditionally
Sweet. Raph and Leo moments are priceless and perfect. Two brothers that are very different, but love each other unconditionally
2/12/2015 c1 nim draug
This is beautiful x
This is beautiful x
5/29/2006 c1 KissMyAft
i'm glad that Leo-Don-Mikey-Raph-&-Splinter made it safely back 2 planet earth alive & this story was so sweet!/it's special how Splinter tucked his sons in 4 the night & banished the dream demons away from them as they was going 2 sleep/i'm worried about Leo & Raph cause i dont want them 2 get hurt when they start hunting bishop because of the way that i feel about them especially Leo
i'm glad that Leo-Don-Mikey-Raph-&-Splinter made it safely back 2 planet earth alive & this story was so sweet!/it's special how Splinter tucked his sons in 4 the night & banished the dream demons away from them as they was going 2 sleep/i'm worried about Leo & Raph cause i dont want them 2 get hurt when they start hunting bishop because of the way that i feel about them especially Leo
1/29/2006 c1 53Jessiy Landroz
that was adorable, in a sad kind of way, having them all cuddle up next to each other like kids... guess you're never too old to get some sort of comfort from your family, and you always make it so darn sweet XD
that was adorable, in a sad kind of way, having them all cuddle up next to each other like kids... guess you're never too old to get some sort of comfort from your family, and you always make it so darn sweet XD
12/7/2005 c1 28innocent-rebel
THANK YOU! Can Bishop die already? i hate him! Loved your story. HATE him! CAn't wait to read your other aftemath stories, gkad i read this one first though.
THANK YOU! Can Bishop die already? i hate him! Loved your story. HATE him! CAn't wait to read your other aftemath stories, gkad i read this one first though.
9/5/2005 c1 10Machias Banshee
Aw... I hadnt seen this before, but Now I'm glad I did. The two younger boys going to Splinter's room was very sweet, and I loved Leo and Raph's solution to which room to stay in.
Mushy fics are good for the soul, but not the blood sugar. :D
Aw... I hadnt seen this before, but Now I'm glad I did. The two younger boys going to Splinter's room was very sweet, and I loved Leo and Raph's solution to which room to stay in.
Mushy fics are good for the soul, but not the blood sugar. :D
9/1/2005 c1 203BubblyShell22
Great story. I can't wait to read the sequel. You are a good writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Great story. I can't wait to read the sequel. You are a good writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/18/2005 c1 20Vampy
Aw... I loved the way Splinter banished the dream demons... This was a great fanfic even though I have never seen "World Collide". I now wish I had... Keep up the good work! ;) V.
Aw... I loved the way Splinter banished the dream demons... This was a great fanfic even though I have never seen "World Collide". I now wish I had... Keep up the good work! ;) V.
8/13/2005 c1 SoonPersephoneAgain
That was brilliant. I loved every word of it.How Splinter 'banished the demons'.ow Mike and Don came to his room at night and cried. And especially how Raph and Leo vowed to take down Bishop together and spare the other two any more pain. Really reaaly good work, Cynlee.
That was brilliant. I loved every word of it.How Splinter 'banished the demons'.ow Mike and Don came to his room at night and cried. And especially how Raph and Leo vowed to take down Bishop together and spare the other two any more pain. Really reaaly good work, Cynlee.
8/10/2005 c1 36Splinter
Wow, how touching. You're really pulling on the heart strings tonite huh? I do hope you continue this one. Leo and Raphs agreement to go after Bishop alone. Sounds like a good plot to me. Although how they'll manage to sneak past splinter I don't know. But hey, they can try
Wow, how touching. You're really pulling on the heart strings tonite huh? I do hope you continue this one. Leo and Raphs agreement to go after Bishop alone. Sounds like a good plot to me. Although how they'll manage to sneak past splinter I don't know. But hey, they can try
8/5/2005 c1 14Ninjalara
Seems I read this fic at the right time :) I haven't seen any more episodes featuring Bishop in them because the DVD hasn't come out yet, so I too have been wondering what happened after Honeycutt died.
You did very well in envisioning how each turtle would react in regards to what role they played during that day. I admit that at first I didn't like how there was only one sentence per paragraph, but as I neared the end of the story, I now absolutely love how you used that format. You could have taken another approach and made this fic overly descriptive, but what really makes this stand out from the rest is that it's not filled with tonnes (and chapters) of pointless angst, but rather raw emotions that seem to highlight the turtle's brotherly bond and understanding. Very well done :) ...Now I can't wait till the next DVD comes out ^_^
Seems I read this fic at the right time :) I haven't seen any more episodes featuring Bishop in them because the DVD hasn't come out yet, so I too have been wondering what happened after Honeycutt died.
You did very well in envisioning how each turtle would react in regards to what role they played during that day. I admit that at first I didn't like how there was only one sentence per paragraph, but as I neared the end of the story, I now absolutely love how you used that format. You could have taken another approach and made this fic overly descriptive, but what really makes this stand out from the rest is that it's not filled with tonnes (and chapters) of pointless angst, but rather raw emotions that seem to highlight the turtle's brotherly bond and understanding. Very well done :) ...Now I can't wait till the next DVD comes out ^_^
8/1/2005 c1 1Doppleganger33
Cool story, I wonder how that conflict with Bishop will be resolved and if Mike and Don can get over their traumas with the help of Splinter.
Hey I'm wondering, maybe after you are done with this do you think you could write one from the other side of the spectrum? What I mean is maybe write one with the aftermath for the Triceratons. Maybe showing the Prime Leader being hauled off to jail or Traximus getting a high ranking position in the Triceraton Repuplic.
Cool story, I wonder how that conflict with Bishop will be resolved and if Mike and Don can get over their traumas with the help of Splinter.
Hey I'm wondering, maybe after you are done with this do you think you could write one from the other side of the spectrum? What I mean is maybe write one with the aftermath for the Triceratons. Maybe showing the Prime Leader being hauled off to jail or Traximus getting a high ranking position in the Triceraton Repuplic.