for Father's Day4/29/2010 c4 
203BubblyShell22
Oh, I can't believe I missed this story. Great job on this. I love the way the Turtles spend time with Splinter in their own way. I know he seems uncomfortable, but I think he enjoys himself nonetheless. I also love the gift they gave him. How sweet.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Oh, I can't believe I missed this story. Great job on this. I love the way the Turtles spend time with Splinter in their own way. I know he seems uncomfortable, but I think he enjoys himself nonetheless. I also love the gift they gave him. How sweet.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
5/26/2008 c1 13dearjoanwallace
You picked the perfect activity for each of the turtles! Of course, as a Leo fan, I was waiting for his part. The ice hockey game with Raph was absolutely hilarious! Too funny how well Splinter wound up fitting in there! I loved Leo's reflective moment with Splinter at the end of the day. This one is definitely a favourite. You write Splinter so well!
13dearjoanwallaceYou picked the perfect activity for each of the turtles! Of course, as a Leo fan, I was waiting for his part. The ice hockey game with Raph was absolutely hilarious! Too funny how well Splinter wound up fitting in there! I loved Leo's reflective moment with Splinter at the end of the day. This one is definitely a favourite. You write Splinter so well!
9/21/2007 c4 2eeveemew
I was laughing my head off, and the ending is sweet. Reminds me of the times I spend with my dad...
2eeveemewI was laughing my head off, and the ending is sweet. Reminds me of the times I spend with my dad...
7/1/2007 c4 OSYH
Some of these lines from the entire story just made me laugh:
"I do not understand this desire for speed."
"...a place with frightening contraptions that people are strapped into, screaming for help."
Some of these lines from the entire story just made me laugh:
"I do not understand this desire for speed."
"...a place with frightening contraptions that people are strapped into, screaming for help."
1/30/2007 c4 TheBandit
Aw... warm fuzzies all around. I'm not reading your stuff in order... just in case you were wondering. :) Happy times. Catch you later!
-Bandit
Aw... warm fuzzies all around. I'm not reading your stuff in order... just in case you were wondering. :) Happy times. Catch you later!
-Bandit
10/18/2006 c4 mou
ehheheh, i thought mikey was the best cook amongst all of them.
ehheheh, i thought mikey was the best cook amongst all of them.
10/18/2006 c3 mou
lol, i think poor sensei is losing his patience to see this through.
lol, i think poor sensei is losing his patience to see this through.
10/18/2006 c2 mou
poor splinter, dragged through all these activities.
poor splinter, dragged through all these activities.
10/18/2006 c1 mou
lol, i love the computer parts, or rather the butchering of the computer parts.
lol, i love the computer parts, or rather the butchering of the computer parts.
3/2/2006 c4 2greshunkai
finally decided to read this one of yours.find that i should have done so long ago. believe you have captured all five characters & put them into print in a very believeable manner.greatly enjoyed this work. thank you.
2greshunkaifinally decided to read this one of yours.find that i should have done so long ago. believe you have captured all five characters & put them into print in a very believeable manner.greatly enjoyed this work. thank you.
2/7/2006 c4 2FireMimi
Really?I wonder how they cook hope the next one isn't another horrible day heh heh (yeah right)
2FireMimiReally?I wonder how they cook hope the next one isn't another horrible day heh heh (yeah right)
11/10/2005 c4 18Goddess of Idun
if i were splinter, and looked back upon this day, i wouldn't know if to laugh or to cry.
18Goddess of Idunif i were splinter, and looked back upon this day, i wouldn't know if to laugh or to cry.
8/2/2005 c4 57Reinbeauchaser
Oh, I think Splinter is finished, too pooped to pop. Poor old rat! Done in by his sons. You can tell he's ready to call it quits, but where the last one is his favorite son, Leo .,.
Blessed son, indeed! Poor rat, but at least Leo figured out his father would be taxed beyond his lmits with the other three turtles. Thoughtful Leo.
What a thoughtful, thoughtful Leo indeed, bringing his father to their original lair. And, making a cup of that blessed, longed-for tea. Yes, Leo certainly knows how to cap off a very busy day.
Splinter stalls for time re: Leo's loaded question - and - well trained in the ninja arts - Leo sees right through it. I lauged out loud, nearly waking my daughter who's napping on our couch.
Oh, the last part of Splinter's monologue was priceless. Truely perfect. I wonder what expression Leo had on his face when he heard that, too.
Ah, the wise rat answers-eth. Nice save, Splinter, nice save indeed! LOL
Oh well, guess the serenity and peace could only last so long, I guess. Love Splinter's remarks and then how he tags it with "I refrain from comment" after learning about the dinner preparation by his other three sons. LOL
LOL LOL Yes, I don't blame you, Splinter. Scrambled eggs twice in the same day is a mite much even for me.
Great job with this; you did well.
Be blessed.
57ReinbeauchaserOh, I think Splinter is finished, too pooped to pop. Poor old rat! Done in by his sons. You can tell he's ready to call it quits, but where the last one is his favorite son, Leo .,.
Blessed son, indeed! Poor rat, but at least Leo figured out his father would be taxed beyond his lmits with the other three turtles. Thoughtful Leo.
What a thoughtful, thoughtful Leo indeed, bringing his father to their original lair. And, making a cup of that blessed, longed-for tea. Yes, Leo certainly knows how to cap off a very busy day.
Splinter stalls for time re: Leo's loaded question - and - well trained in the ninja arts - Leo sees right through it. I lauged out loud, nearly waking my daughter who's napping on our couch.
Oh, the last part of Splinter's monologue was priceless. Truely perfect. I wonder what expression Leo had on his face when he heard that, too.
Ah, the wise rat answers-eth. Nice save, Splinter, nice save indeed! LOL
Oh well, guess the serenity and peace could only last so long, I guess. Love Splinter's remarks and then how he tags it with "I refrain from comment" after learning about the dinner preparation by his other three sons. LOL
LOL LOL Yes, I don't blame you, Splinter. Scrambled eggs twice in the same day is a mite much even for me.
Great job with this; you did well.
Be blessed.
8/2/2005 c3 Reinbeauchaser
LOL Poor Splinter; all he really wants is to have quiet time and his cup of tea.
I laughed outloud with his, 'where, exactly, is Coney Island'. LOL
Ah, he's longed to visit the ocean and now, here he is. How sweet. (grins)
LOL, seeing those on the rides at CI screaming for help. If that's what he sees, boy, is he in for a surprise. I wonder if Mike is going to be able to get him on any of the rides.
Loved Splinter's description of the affects the rides have on him. Certainly, I can relate, oh yeah!
Oh, I hate the Twirl O Wheel, and I totally understand Splinter NOT wanting to eat after being on that contracption.
Ancient master sayings? Um.,.maybe, but I wouldn't put money on it. Just the same, it's hilarious that Splinter thinks so. LOL
Great job - again!
Be blessed.
LOL Poor Splinter; all he really wants is to have quiet time and his cup of tea.
I laughed outloud with his, 'where, exactly, is Coney Island'. LOL
Ah, he's longed to visit the ocean and now, here he is. How sweet. (grins)
LOL, seeing those on the rides at CI screaming for help. If that's what he sees, boy, is he in for a surprise. I wonder if Mike is going to be able to get him on any of the rides.
Loved Splinter's description of the affects the rides have on him. Certainly, I can relate, oh yeah!
Oh, I hate the Twirl O Wheel, and I totally understand Splinter NOT wanting to eat after being on that contracption.
Ancient master sayings? Um.,.maybe, but I wouldn't put money on it. Just the same, it's hilarious that Splinter thinks so. LOL
Great job - again!
Be blessed.