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8/6/2005 c2 1applesandtea
gyaa~~ i love your story
8/6/2005 c2 2Shinobi Darkbeak
hi cool chapter plz update soon i can't wait to see what happnes next, anyways keep up the good work ^_^
8/4/2005 c1 krista
Okay! Good beginning chapter. Still weird...JUST UPDATE !
8/4/2005 c1 Shinobi Darkbeak
hi this realy interesting plz update soon and keep up the good work ^_^
8/4/2005 c1 12KuroCake
wow! that's pretty good for a first chap! as a compliment, your fic has a point and there's the story'd destination. i mean, it has sense and all!

for the critisms, you need to upgrade your grammar a lil more but i think it's okay. i think no one will notice. and you need to put many japanese terms like, 'Mrs. Haruno to Haruno-san'; 'thank you to arigato'; 'please to onegai'.

but i still think ur fic is cute! keep upd8ing and i will always keep my support to you!^_^

zakurrah-chan
8/3/2005 c1 egustogustason
cool story! !ahh! please update soon!
8/3/2005 c1 1applesandtea
this is a good story ^^. why is sakura going away? will she see sasuke again? what will her friends think? it's really good for your first fanfic ^^. um...please R&R my fanfic. it's pretty bad but it gets better in the more recent chapters. also, i'm not a great author like you and it's my first fanfic so please be nice if you review. Please TRY to read and review EVERY single chapter. i want to know your opinion on each and every one of them. ^^ thanks for being so nice~ byebye..hope you update soon ^^.
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