for Leader of the Pack3/17/2010 c2 Anticia
I cracked up on Leo-Raph cpnversation, and Leo stubbornly getting up - typical and so hilarious XD
Raph: "Won't help- it'll just make me want to hit him all the harder."
ROFL XD
I cracked up on Leo-Raph cpnversation, and Leo stubbornly getting up - typical and so hilarious XD
Raph: "Won't help- it'll just make me want to hit him all the harder."
ROFL XD
11/18/2009 c6 
49zenonaa
The first incident was funny. The second time was funnier. And the last time was hilarious. Great story, awesome ending! xD
49zenonaaThe first incident was funny. The second time was funnier. And the last time was hilarious. Great story, awesome ending! xD
8/2/2008 c1 meebles
FUNNY! I LOVED it! Please! Please! Please continue! One of my favorite stories I've read in my entire life! My favorite parts were when Leo tried to escape and his brothers found out being a leader is not always fun...the hard way! Storytelling is your gift. I was laughing soo hard my siblings stared as if I was a freak or something.
FUNNY! I LOVED it! Please! Please! Please continue! One of my favorite stories I've read in my entire life! My favorite parts were when Leo tried to escape and his brothers found out being a leader is not always fun...the hard way! Storytelling is your gift. I was laughing soo hard my siblings stared as if I was a freak or something.
2/15/2006 c6 13Flame Guardian
this was a really sweet story. I liked how you stayed true to everyone's character as they are in the new series. Good work.
13Flame Guardianthis was a really sweet story. I liked how you stayed true to everyone's character as they are in the new series. Good work.
11/10/2005 c6 18Goddess of Idun
...ouch!
such a funny story! i nearly cried of laughter when i read about how leo tripped over the toy car a SECOND time...
18Goddess of Idun...ouch!
such a funny story! i nearly cried of laughter when i read about how leo tripped over the toy car a SECOND time...
10/15/2005 c6 37898700
He he. Yes, I guess reading a story once it is completely posted is not the same than waiting for the next post, uh? Because now I have it all on my head, and that doesn't allows me to review each one of the chapters, as each one of them have commendable parts.
I liked it, wholeheartedly, loved the "We are telling you an history" way you wrote it, adored how they took care of Leo and how he didn't gave up ... till the end. It must have be that I read this so fast, but something is bugging me. As if you hurried up on the last two chapters, putting less comentaries from our three narrators.
Anyway, it didn't dimished the greatness of this piece of work. My love to you.
Jerico Cacaw
37898700He he. Yes, I guess reading a story once it is completely posted is not the same than waiting for the next post, uh? Because now I have it all on my head, and that doesn't allows me to review each one of the chapters, as each one of them have commendable parts.
I liked it, wholeheartedly, loved the "We are telling you an history" way you wrote it, adored how they took care of Leo and how he didn't gave up ... till the end. It must have be that I read this so fast, but something is bugging me. As if you hurried up on the last two chapters, putting less comentaries from our three narrators.
Anyway, it didn't dimished the greatness of this piece of work. My love to you.
Jerico Cacaw
9/27/2005 c6 Cassie
Hahahahahahaha! I love it!
Hahahahahahaha! I love it!
8/14/2005 c6 Dory's human replica
MIKEY STOP LEAVING YOUR TOYS LYING AROUND DAMMIT! Lol, I loved it - it was so cool - and Leo did need to learn to let himself be taken care of! Really really enjoyed this chapter - it made me laugh and I love the commentary running through it.
MIKEY STOP LEAVING YOUR TOYS LYING AROUND DAMMIT! Lol, I loved it - it was so cool - and Leo did need to learn to let himself be taken care of! Really really enjoyed this chapter - it made me laugh and I love the commentary running through it.
8/7/2005 c6 13Anyuna
Mikey was going to say 'crocodile tears' wasn't he? And Jr'kof? Well, when I had that pointed out (courtesy of Mikey) I almost fell off my chair laughing. Classic. I really loved this fic.
Love, peace and chicken grease
Cheese Monkey
13AnyunaMikey was going to say 'crocodile tears' wasn't he? And Jr'kof? Well, when I had that pointed out (courtesy of Mikey) I almost fell off my chair laughing. Classic. I really loved this fic.
Love, peace and chicken grease
Cheese Monkey
8/7/2005 c6 53Jessiy Landroz
HONESTLY! Mike should learn to put away his toys XD poor Leo, why does he have such darn luck? Well, lets hope its not Raph's turn this time, eh? XD
wonderful story, :3
53Jessiy LandrozHONESTLY! Mike should learn to put away his toys XD poor Leo, why does he have such darn luck? Well, lets hope its not Raph's turn this time, eh? XD
wonderful story, :3