for Leader of the Pack8/6/2005 c6 SoonPersephoneAgain
Lol! I loved that last line. Great story. Um, Leatherhead is an Utrom? LH is that croc dude right? Sigh, sorry I'm slow. Guess it doesn't matter that much anyway. Raph did a very good job on his turn as leader. And it is good to see them all pitching in to help Leo now. Nicely done!
Lol! I loved that last line. Great story. Um, Leatherhead is an Utrom? LH is that croc dude right? Sigh, sorry I'm slow. Guess it doesn't matter that much anyway. Raph did a very good job on his turn as leader. And it is good to see them all pitching in to help Leo now. Nicely done!
8/6/2005 c6 ShadowbladeMaliki
*dies laughing* Jr'Kof...man I'm good. the name worked perfect, good effect haha
I love the story...the whole thing.
*dies laughing* Jr'Kof...man I'm good. the name worked perfect, good effect haha
I love the story...the whole thing.
8/6/2005 c6 
9Lunar-ninja
Aww, shoot. Last chapter. (starts to read)
Utrom? Why you dirty little pipsqueak...(lunges at the Utrom)
Heh, sorry to be a wet blanket, but his name's Ch'rell. However, Ch'rall will work.
Yeah, Don lost a duffel bag in his excitement. Poor guy. His pride and joy.
Oh, the whole incident all over again! Poor Leo...Heheh, more torturous bed rest.
LN
9Lunar-ninjaAww, shoot. Last chapter. (starts to read)
Utrom? Why you dirty little pipsqueak...(lunges at the Utrom)
Heh, sorry to be a wet blanket, but his name's Ch'rell. However, Ch'rall will work.
Yeah, Don lost a duffel bag in his excitement. Poor guy. His pride and joy.
Oh, the whole incident all over again! Poor Leo...Heheh, more torturous bed rest.
LN
8/6/2005 c5 SoonPersephoneAgain
I like this very much! What is Mike's crystal dream? And where is the Shredder again? Sorry- I've only seen four random episodes- I don't have that 4kidstv thing. Poor Leo. I keep thinking this is a Splinter trick but I'm probably wrong. keep it up
I like this very much! What is Mike's crystal dream? And where is the Shredder again? Sorry- I've only seen four random episodes- I don't have that 4kidstv thing. Poor Leo. I keep thinking this is a Splinter trick but I'm probably wrong. keep it up
8/6/2005 c3 9Lunar-ninja
Heheh, mind-numbing activity...
Sit on him, by all means, April. That is, if you can catch him. Greenstreak Leo doesn't go down without a fight. (chuckles)
Plotting ninja turtles always find a way to peeve the nurses. (giggles) Leo-san, good luck with that one!
LN
9Lunar-ninjaHeheh, mind-numbing activity...
Sit on him, by all means, April. That is, if you can catch him. Greenstreak Leo doesn't go down without a fight. (chuckles)
Plotting ninja turtles always find a way to peeve the nurses. (giggles) Leo-san, good luck with that one!
LN
8/6/2005 c3 SoonPersephoneAgain
Wow, Casey and April are -really really- nice. OHnestly, I thought Splinter was just messing with them again at first. But now, I wonder who it could be? I rather like the commentary youhave inserted here and there, but why doen't Leo talk? I hope Mike/Don/Raph all learn a good lesson about leadership, and start to appreciate all Leo does for them more. THis is good- keep at it.
Wow, Casey and April are -really really- nice. OHnestly, I thought Splinter was just messing with them again at first. But now, I wonder who it could be? I rather like the commentary youhave inserted here and there, but why doen't Leo talk? I hope Mike/Don/Raph all learn a good lesson about leadership, and start to appreciate all Leo does for them more. THis is good- keep at it.
8/6/2005 c3 53Jessiy Landroz
poor, poor Leo XD its hard being a busybody glued to a bed, huh? the turtle needs to move, to go out and DO something XD I'm surprised Splinter didnt drug him, or April didnt actually tie him to bed...
Hey? When is Raph's turn at leadership? I wanna see havoc let loose!
53Jessiy Landrozpoor, poor Leo XD its hard being a busybody glued to a bed, huh? the turtle needs to move, to go out and DO something XD I'm surprised Splinter didnt drug him, or April didnt actually tie him to bed...
Hey? When is Raph's turn at leadership? I wanna see havoc let loose!
8/5/2005 c3 13Anyuna
I wonder if Leo will ever manage to escape? Poor guy. And who's screwing with the alarms?
13AnyunaI wonder if Leo will ever manage to escape? Poor guy. And who's screwing with the alarms?
8/5/2005 c3 6Donny's Girl
um...yeah, leo? you're being more stubborn than raph!
Leo: *glares* Shut up you.
*glares too* No! ^_^
Great job!
Monica;)
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6Donny's Girlum...yeah, leo? you're being more stubborn than raph!
Leo: *glares* Shut up you.
*glares too* No! ^_^
Great job!
Monica;)
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8/5/2005 c2 Donny's Girl
yeah sure...you keep thinking that leo. lol. I love this! keep it up!
Monica;)
yeah sure...you keep thinking that leo. lol. I love this! keep it up!
Monica;)
8/5/2005 c1 Donny's Girl
heeheehee...poor mikey lolololol this is great! will be keeping up;)
Monica;)
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heeheehee...poor mikey lolololol this is great! will be keeping up;)
Monica;)
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8/5/2005 c2 15Dory's human replica
Keep going! This is hilarious! I love it - and I wanna see how Raph and Don fare with Leo's chores along with some more escape attempts from Leo - heh, he sounds like me when I hurt myself! :p Great story - keep up the good work!
15Dory's human replicaKeep going! This is hilarious! I love it - and I wanna see how Raph and Don fare with Leo's chores along with some more escape attempts from Leo - heh, he sounds like me when I hurt myself! :p Great story - keep up the good work!